Beach Sunset

The white sand of the beach
is still warm as the sun sets
A cool breeze twists in the air
riding on the warm air currents
A lone gull settles on the damp sand
The setting sun sets  the scene on fire
The gull pauses patiently waiting
as the sun's fire unfurls with a flare

Reviews

[Eric Cox]

This is beautiful. Makes me want to be there. Nice pen on this.

[Star Wolf]

Very beautiful and peaceful, love it. I want to go there right now and relax and enjoy myself.

[Buddhistboy73]

beautiful imagery here...I really connected with the emotions behind this piece...one of nature;s gifts....well described. Loved the final line..."as the sun's fire unfurls with a flare".....

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful sounding beach, wish I was there right now. Impressive!

[master squiggles]

I love this! It's sad though, because the beach I went to this summer reminds me a lot of the one you described here, and I miss it. Beautiful imagery, good topic to write about - I loved it.