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A sad goodbye

A sad goodbye

A Poem by WordlessFacade
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No one likes goodbyes, especially when you won't see them again.

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Mom, I don't want to go to school
just for today
and don't worry
all I need is a day

You don't understand
the pain I'm going through
They're mean to me mom!
But you cant see that, can you?

You said I couldn't go
Unless I'm barfing, or start to bleed
But I make me bleed mom!
on the arms I never let you see.


They call me names and pull my hair
while telling me to die
they don't care mom
even when I cry

I'm really scared mom
I can't find the pills or the rope
I guess I'll have to use
the knife that you don't know

I know you'll be sad
but please don't cry
When you see my body, just remember
everyone has to die

 

But look at the good things Mom!
I'm high above
Away from the bullies now
and I can say hi to grandma

But I can't say hi to you mom
dad, or my family at home
...I'm really sorry mom
for what I have done.

But you should've see
how they treated me
and the reason I died
was because no one cared enough to help me

I'm sorry mom
but I say goodbye to you
to dad, and everyone
I bid my final adieu

And tell our friends and family
tell them not to cry
and if they're sad or down
not to be with me in the sky

So I say in the sky
that this is my sad goodbye
and my tears come like rain when you cry
never let others give in to suicide.

© 2014 WordlessFacade


Author's Note

WordlessFacade
I hope you like it.

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It almost made me cry
Good writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


It was a hard poem for me to read, because God knows I've been through it countless times. My depression led me to suicide, tried to anyway. But it was a great poem, kinda summed it all up. I don't know if you've been through this but either way, it struck a chord in me. Triggering at times of deep, dark depression, but it's an amazingly written work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1Disawsum

9 Years Ago

Thanks xx I am, thank goodness. I've been adopted so I'm in a happier and safer atmosphere and home .. read more
WordlessFacade

9 Years Ago

No problem. And your poems were always inspiring to me, never give up, and I'll try to be here when .. read more
1Disawsum

9 Years Ago

aaw thanks! :) xxx
You have a great way of telling a story. That's what I like about your poetry, you know how to paint a picture for the reader. Your story is so current and really hits a nerve for the reader. This story reminds me of a girl I know. She's intellegent and drop dead beautiful, but she's alternative in appearance and philosophy so she has been beaten and bullied on multiple occasions and she's a cutter with suicidal tendancies. Your poem brings it all home and makes me sad. I loved it.

I have been on hiatus for a few months, but will be re-opening my account again soon. I will friend you when I do, because I want to read more or your work as you post it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


WordlessFacade

9 Years Ago

Thanks I'll try and post more soon! ^-^
The life of a person that has been bullied and started self harming was very well put in your poem. They should have noticed they should have cared to see what was going to happen but they didn't. People seem to avoid this because they are scared but they should see what is going on. Though i do think that the person should not be hurting themselves just because people are being mean to them because that's what the bullies want, you should pick yourself up and move on tell some one you trust that your being bullied. If you have suicidal thought or you feel like your depressed try to get help. Life sucks you just have to deal with it and move on. Sorry just had to say that. Thank you for writing a very good poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


WordlessFacade

9 Years Ago

I'm glad you liked it. :D
The darkness here is detailed and shines a big light on reality. This things has happen to many teens because of lack attention, love and understanding. This is sad yet raw. Good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


WordlessFacade

9 Years Ago

Thanks :) I'm glad you like it

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Added on April 23, 2014
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Hey, I'm Jazz, and I'm someone that has a passion for writing poetry. :D I honestly have been on hiatus for a while, trying to inspire myself once more, but I hope to start posting again! I hope you.. more..

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