It was a hard poem for me to read, because God knows I've been through it countless times. My depression led me to suicide, tried to anyway. But it was a great poem, kinda summed it all up. I don't know if you've been through this but either way, it struck a chord in me. Triggering at times of deep, dark depression, but it's an amazingly written work.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I'm sorry that this happened to you. :( and I hope that you're doing better than before. If I knew w.. read moreI'm sorry that this happened to you. :( and I hope that you're doing better than before. If I knew where you were, I would give you a hug, but since I cannot, I want to thank you. For being strong, even when times were hard for you, and for being here, for being alive. Your poetry is amazing and you say some of the kindest things. I know that so many would miss you if you were to go so, stay strong. And if you need someone to talk to, I'm here! :D
Thanks xx I am, thank goodness. I've been adopted so I'm in a happier and safer atmosphere and home .. read moreThanks xx I am, thank goodness. I've been adopted so I'm in a happier and safer atmosphere and home now. I was never strong. When things got hard, all I did was cut. Binge. Restrict. That's my way of coping, and though it may be dangerous, everything else has failed me. Drawing, I fail at. Writing, doesn't help when I desperately need it, so what else is left for me? Nothing. Cutting releases the tension, the anger and the sadness. The deep pain, the hurt and betrayal. It helps me so much. But now? I can't say I've given up on it completely, but I've been restricted from it. I can't say that I haven't tried to somehow obtain any sharp object, because I have. But I've always been caught, and my punishment? Being looked after 24/7 fora few days straight. It's hard, it's so hard being strong. Is it worth it? I still haven't found that answer yet.
For being here? I don't know if I like it here. I just don't know. Being alive? I don't like it, but I have to live with it now, well, maybe temporarily. I've been given too many chances to live, all against my will. But since it's happened time and time again, I guess I'll just have to "suck it up" don't I? :)
Thankyou, it's very kind of you! Your poetry always strikes a chord in me, whether it be hope, wish, dream or tragedy. I love your poems! Thankyou, I'll be sure to get into contact with you if I'm in need of a friend to talk to! Thankyou again xxx
9 Years Ago
No problem. And your poems were always inspiring to me, never give up, and I'll try to be here when .. read moreNo problem. And your poems were always inspiring to me, never give up, and I'll try to be here when I can! :)
You have a great way of telling a story. That's what I like about your poetry, you know how to paint a picture for the reader. Your story is so current and really hits a nerve for the reader. This story reminds me of a girl I know. She's intellegent and drop dead beautiful, but she's alternative in appearance and philosophy so she has been beaten and bullied on multiple occasions and she's a cutter with suicidal tendancies. Your poem brings it all home and makes me sad. I loved it.
I have been on hiatus for a few months, but will be re-opening my account again soon. I will friend you when I do, because I want to read more or your work as you post it.
The life of a person that has been bullied and started self harming was very well put in your poem. They should have noticed they should have cared to see what was going to happen but they didn't. People seem to avoid this because they are scared but they should see what is going on. Though i do think that the person should not be hurting themselves just because people are being mean to them because that's what the bullies want, you should pick yourself up and move on tell some one you trust that your being bullied. If you have suicidal thought or you feel like your depressed try to get help. Life sucks you just have to deal with it and move on. Sorry just had to say that. Thank you for writing a very good poem.
The darkness here is detailed and shines a big light on reality. This things has happen to many teens because of lack attention, love and understanding. This is sad yet raw. Good write.
Hey, I'm Jazz, and I'm someone that has a passion for writing poetry. :D
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