Lips

Lips

A Poem by Titan
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One of my favorites so far.

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Lips

brushing, joining, mashing

kissing.

Tongues

pushing, jostling, playing

laughing.

Hands

holding, squeezing, guiding

inviting.

Pink rosy cheeks

caressed by fingertips,

smiles emerge

with unified

lips.



© 2010 Titan



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Damn this is one sensual masterpiece! o_o
Sexy!

Posted 8 Years Ago


That is just so fantastic. I miss my boyfriend...boohoo. I need a new one. I love it.
Good job, Titan
xxoo Kisses from me...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What I like best about your writing so far is that it's just fun to read. I was immediately pulled in by the centered alignment and small to large font and then back down again. Basically this captured the kissing excitement, haha very nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this poem. Each word with a purpose. Poem is fun too read. Flow of words moved perfect. The emotion and desire of love is strong in the words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, sweet poem, very descriptive, i like it. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


16 views & only one review. What a shame because this poem is also very well written, I like the small rhyme at the end. The short descreptive verbs cast a variety of images into the reader's head. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


you have a way with writing simply and sweetly minus the cheesy

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2010
Last Updated on February 23, 2010
Tags: young love, exploration, curiosity, love, romance, innocence, youth

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Titan

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I'm just a teenager who writes about what he cannot express in words. Oh, and by the way, I'm gay. -- I am quite thankful for all the reviewers and readers. Never would I have thought that any .. more..

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