TEASING

This is just something I wrote out of frustration and not knowing whether to give up or not.

TEASING

 

 

Stop teasing me

hugging me

watching me

smiling

chatting me

bumping me

texting me

dialing

 

(Aren’t you straight, a*****e?)

 

You constantly let me down,

yet you’re still the best part of my day.

You turn my emotions around

in quite the abnormal way.

 

So keep texting me

hugging me

watching me

pleasing

 

As a matter of fact

…I don’t mind the teasing.

Author's Note

I know there are a few flow issues. I wrote this in a rant.

Reviews

[Rhonda]

this was a great poem

[wolfshrew]

I thought the flow was fine
I related to parts of this in a
way that made me angry for
being able to, haha

good rant, keep it up.

[Princy]

Ooooo ;-) I love ur poems!

[alec merdin]

very nice lol and i totally get it and that you wrote it in a rant only makes it better

[Coyote Poetry]

Can't win for losing. Too much attention or not enough. I like the flow of the poem and the story was very good. Thank you.
Coyote