Out of Tune

Out of Tune

A Poem by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
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To be a well used piano... that is what we should aim to be in life!

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© 2010 Tomás Ó Cárthaigh



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Quite a wonderful composition with the music and words not to mention the picture of the broken down piano. That picture says a thousand words and give credence to the story at hand. I don' think the poem would have had the same impact had you not posted the audio version. It's always beautiful to hear the writer recite his work the way he meant it to be read - Thank you!

Beautifully done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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beautiful job! can't say much more than that

Posted 7 Years Ago


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everything was mixed and placed very well. your voice lined up with the music perfectly. the broken piano reminds me of a lot of things and it's a perfect touch to bring your poem to life

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bravo...excellent, beautiful and very moving. An outstanding effort.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Congratulations on winning. I do not have much to say here, except that it is beautiful, and is one of the best poems I've read on Writers Cafe! And the music definitely was a great addition :)
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, and haunting, made more poignant by the music and your narration. Lovely work here. Thank you ever so much for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Great poem. The music worked so well with all of it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very very beautiful. I loved it a lot. Great job. =)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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This is a wanderful poem, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Quite a wonderful composition with the music and words not to mention the picture of the broken down piano. That picture says a thousand words and give credence to the story at hand. I don' think the poem would have had the same impact had you not posted the audio version. It's always beautiful to hear the writer recite his work the way he meant it to be read - Thank you!

Beautifully done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. That's the only word I can find to describe this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 24, 2010
Last Updated on April 24, 2010
Tags: life, moral, aim, passing

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh
Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Renmore, Galway, Ireland, An Roinne Mór, Gallaimh, Eire, Ireland



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