You Used To Be

You Used To Be

A Poem by Tomi

There’s a book of sad stories where my heart used to be
Music, art, love, hate and who we used to be
There’s a space in history where we used to be
Too bad, you forgot the person you used to be

© 2013 Tomi



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At first I was a bit thrown with the four line rhyme with the infinitive. But the more I read this, the more I like it.Nice write

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tomi

4 Years Ago

Thank You :)
a lot said in four lines :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tomi

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
It is sad when we forget who we were. We become empty shells with with no purpose. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tomi

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Stunning work,Tomi

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tomi

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Tomi
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