Goodbye My Friend

Goodbye My Friend

A Poem by Tomi

Rip Dipo


Reality is confusing

And death is for sure

A wish of my choosing

Would be for death a cure


I hate being uncertain

But life begs to differ

It’s mostly disconcerting

Cause death begs to differ


I’ll always remember you

Your laugh and your quirks

But soon they’ll bury you

And frankly that sucks


My heart bleeds

And my eyelids

Are fragile from

Releasing all this pain


For now, I cease to write

For life’s journey I’ll keep this fight

I wish you were here though

Oh Dipo. Why did you have to go


But I’m sure I’ll see you

Hopefully not anytime soon

For now I’ll carry the joys

Of cracking jokes with you


You were intelligent, smart

We had some deep conversations

Some weird ones too

Goodbye my friend, goodbye


Sleep well, the earth’s loss. Bye, bye, bye dipo. Of all the sad goodbyes I’ve had to say yours hurt the most. Bye. Your Friend Tomi




© 2013 Tomi

Author's Note

Lost a friend Today...still shocked..unbelievable..was in denail through out today. Not really a tribute just me rambling in sorrow. Life is tough but i'm sure he'll tell me to move on..

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your heart pours from this piece. Loss is painful. Time heals the broken parts, but never fills the empty spots. That spot will always be there for him. great piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago

my condolences, its never easy to lose someone but he still lives on in write.

Posted 4 Years Ago

i'm sorry for your loss, may his soul rest in perfect peace

Posted 4 Years Ago

I am sorry for your loss. This is a very emotional poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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I am sorry ,Tomi. My concerns go out to you and your friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago

This is shocking and unpleasant in the moment so sad for the lost of a loved one. The choice of word captured it enough. Welldone I might say, but is a petty for whosoever you have lost. Tomi.

Posted 4 Years Ago

A true, honest tribute to your friend, Tomi. Not many people can express their grief so completely. You did it well.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Sad, well written, I believe every word and admire the depth of your friendship.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Good to remember friends lost too soon. I'm sorry for your lost. I believe writing allowed us to release sadness and later. Remember them. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago

This is a lovely piece. I could feel what you were/are feeling.

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on April 7, 2013
Last Updated on April 8, 2013




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