Just words, from me to whoever needs them

Just words, from me to whoever needs them

A Poem by Tomoe Tellez
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These are just words I wrote when I had inspiration

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That so messed up feeling you get when you can't be enough for someone

And that person is more than enough for many

 

Sometimes it's too late to ask for forgiveness

But it's never too late for revenge

 

The darker the sky

The more stars you'll see

And the brighter they will be

 

Some words are stronger than others

You give them the volume

You give them the power

 

Don't wait for tomorrow

Tomorrow should wait for you

 

Heroes have mortal bodies

But immortal names

And the legends 

There are endless


© 2015 Tomoe Tellez



Author's Note

Tomoe Tellez
Which was your favorite? And what do think? These are just a couple of my quotes.

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The title of the poem is so apt. These truly are words, I'm sure, many will need (My personal favourite is: "Sometimes it's too late to ask for forgiveness; But it's never too late for revenge" :)) A great read, and a really good write. Thanks for sharing.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

That quote seems to be the favorite of most, there's some really dark writers here, lol :D! Thanks f.. read more



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wow i really love this piece of work
you really are an outstanding writer !!!!
100 points for this beautiful work

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

:D Thank you so much! You're very nice.
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

my pleasure !!!
The title of the poem is so apt. These truly are words, I'm sure, many will need (My personal favourite is: "Sometimes it's too late to ask for forgiveness; But it's never too late for revenge" :)) A great read, and a really good write. Thanks for sharing.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

That quote seems to be the favorite of most, there's some really dark writers here, lol :D! Thanks f.. read more
Really strong words of motivation, this should be put in a frame and hung on a wall.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Oh my gosh! Thanks!
"Some words are stronger than others
You give them the volume
You give them the power"

This is beautiful and empowering. What a quote! Thank you for this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for your words! :D
Well, before i get to it, i must mention the rating... 100 points, cuz the write is awesome! These quotes actually got me right on the spot. First of all, lets go with number one... Something like the issue with the "cool kids" in school. You're never good enough for them, but they're always more than good enough to everyone else. Atleast, that is what we see.

Moving on, to the one written with green. Some words are stronger than others, you give them the volume. True, in more ways than one. Very well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Wow! Thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked them. :)
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
'The darker the sky
The more stars you'll see
And the brighter they will be'
This quote is so powerful. The life of some persons may reside in the darkness, bathing in the sadness of their tears but if you strengthen your heart and open your heart to hope, for one must never lean on darkness because as long as hope remains in your heart, the lingering darkness shall become afraid of your light (resolve) and one shall shine brighter than the other starts have ever shined. You have talent and your quotes are so awesome and inspiring.

Good job :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Oh my gosh! Thank you very much for you kind words! :)
Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

No problem :)

Some words are stronger than others
You give them the volume
You give them the power

This is a powerful quote. Words have more effect than people realize they can be used for building up or tearing down. Either way way words must be chosen carefully as they have much power. Really good read.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading! :)
Sultrysoul

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend
I like "don't wait for tomorrow, tomorrow should wait for you" being in the moment, I agree with this,
inspired quotes,thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading!
They're all quite good and I just had a wicked idea... you could start a contest and ask people to choose one of them as writing prompt. Would be interesting to see what different writers would come up with... :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Hey, that sounds great! I had no intention of doing any contest, but if you don't mind I'll take you.. read more
Kaliope

2 Years Ago

haha, by all means, go ahead! I might submit a story or two of my own if you don't mind!
"That messed up feeling when you cant be enough for someone and that person is more than enough for many".
This one is my favourite :)
Very well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thanks! I wrote it because of my parents. I feel like I will always be under their shadow, they seem.. read more
Shah Sabia

2 Years Ago

Haha well no, you are not right feeling this. Its for the time being that you are under their shadow.. read more

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Tags: words, quotes, heroes, revenge, stars, dark, tomorrow, feelings

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