Haven of love- A collaboration with Danny

Haven of love- A collaboration with Danny

A Poem by Tomoe Tellez
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Just a poem Danny and I made to help me get over my writer's block. Thank you, Danny!

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There's some wine and bread left
A candle to lit dreams while you rest
Take the bed, you need it more
Don't worry, I'll sleep on the floor
Just wish me a good night
Tomorrow everything will be alright
Your wounds will heal in time
Our scars will resemble the fight
We went through in this life
You're not alone anymore
For you are the one I adore

© 2015 Tomoe Tellez



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Getting two minds to come together with one understanding may be the hardest thing a writer can ever do. Getting two pens to write the same words with the same meanings is a monumental event so I applaud your accomplishment. To work with another and turn out a work of literature like this deserves a Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap!

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot for reading!



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thanks for asking me to look at this. its well deserving praise. good job guys

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very beautiful! I love the lines and flow of this piece. Great job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks :D!
collabs are hard...
well done!!

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Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Well, it wasn't too hard for me, I had fun writing it with the help of Danny, he is great. Thanks fo.. read more
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I thought this was very simple and sweet. I enjoyed it and hoped it helped the writersblock

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Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

It sure did thanks to my awesome friend Danny, thanks for reading!
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This is cute. I like the rhyme and flow but I also like the message. A nice piece to get you out of writers' block!

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Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks, I'm glad you think it's cute, like I told Adams, I don't normally write romance, so writing .. read more
Wowww. This is just great. I really loved it.

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Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks, I'm glad you loved it!:D
Kinda ... intriguing to read how love may shape the analogies of love-vibes. Love's such a beautiful as well as darkest thing ev'r in the world that has potential to ... take life away off the world, neither it brings peace nor so much loneliness ... what all it serves to heart's virtue with heartaches ...

... like the title either: "Heaven Of Love" .. sounds astounding.

Take the bed, you need it more
Don't worry, I'll sleep on the floor

These lines're romantic enough to be adored so I believe, the poetry's speaks the heart, beautifully. Would be looking forward to reading "you"!

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Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Hey, thanks a lot for your kind words, I don't normally write romance, but Danny helped me, I'm pret.. read more
A nice journey to a very good ending.
"You're not alone anymore
For you are the one I adore"
I like the above ending. To be adored. A very good place to be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading this poem. :D
Getting two minds to come together with one understanding may be the hardest thing a writer can ever do. Getting two pens to write the same words with the same meanings is a monumental event so I applaud your accomplishment. To work with another and turn out a work of literature like this deserves a Standing Ovation! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot for reading!
It's always a pleasure to read poetry like this. And since my boyfriend was part of the creation of this one, I just had to read it. Cute write, I give maximum rating :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dani The Unreviewed

1 Year Ago

xD we just thought...not important. lol usually you comment on reviews right after reading them. lol.. read more
Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Yes I do or did, I read them on the cell phone and at night I'd answer them in my laptop, but now I'.. read more
A writer

1 Year Ago

Oh... well then, it is all cleared. :) I want to see more of your collaborations, in the future :-)

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