Jeepers Creepers !

My entry for the Halloween contest...

Halloween is drawing near, I hope it’s not as terrifying as last year!

So many ghosts & ghouls came to my door, trick or treat their implore!

First Frankenstein tall and green, I felt sorry for him know what I mean?

Next Dracula scenting blood, but he’s just an amorous old stud!

A werewolf knocked awful hairy, I just smiled, he's not that scary!

Then a mummy wrapped in linen, from ear to ear had me grinning!

A zombie pretending to be dead, did not fill me full of dread!

along with several ghosts in white, had me chuckling an amusing sight!

The invisible man made me grin, I easily saw straight through him!

To each and every one I gave a treat, even a ghoul likes a sweet!

My final visitor a wicked witch, I laughed so much, I took a stitch!

Then she pulled off her mask and I got the fright of my life, Jeepers Creepers it was the wife!

Reviews

[Norman T]

Ah, this reminded me that we must start collecting sweets and fruit for next month's ghoul invasion.
My wife is taking me around , but has decided I won't need any sort of disguise. I think she was inspired by your poem. I had enjoyed it up to then - now you have a lot to answer for. lol.

Norman

[Tom]

Thanks once more Norman and indeed it's getting close to that time of the year again, just hope Mrs Tom does not try that trick again ?? Lol...

[Woody]

haha vey nicely done and so funny. the ending is a beaut.
I hope you kept it from the wife :)

[Tom]

Indeed not Woody, she was first to proof it, after all Mrs Tom has a good sense of humour too, didn't she marry yours truly here ??

[Woody]

yes what was I thinking?
birds of a feather, eh?

[Flora]

You have an amazing talent for poetry!!! Keep them coming!!!!

[Tom]

Thank you Flora for such a nice compliment !

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I loved this had me smiling lol, Even took me back in time, But the end ha ha! Ya wife just may kill ya for that and be worse the movie Jeepers Creepers, Plus that record might be playing! Jeepers creepers where ya get those peepers lol.

[Tom]

Thank you Jonathan, but when the lovely Mrs Tom suggested I didn't need a false-face for Halloween, I came up with this..( Touche ) !

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Lol Tom Your very welcome

[Abdul Aziz]

Haha, I laughed throughout the poem. Every time I came upon something I liked, I made a mental note to quote it in this review. But then the next line topped it or was its equal, and by the time I finished reading the poem, I feel compelled to quote it in its entirety. Which I shall not do, and instead add this to my library!

[Tom]

Thank you Abdul, very happy to know you enjoyed this!

[Angi]

Ha! Better be careful calling the wife a wicked witch, Tom! I love Halloween and passing out treats to all the little monsters. Cute poem. Angi~

[Tom]

Thank you Angi !

[MsJewel]

An adorable Halloween tale - cute and clever! Good luck in the contest. Your poem reads like a winner to me! :) Julie

[Tom]

Thank you Julie !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Funny and clever, Tom. This one is different from other Halloween-inspired pieces.

I laughed at the perfect ending you have made here especially this phrase:
"...I got the fright of my life, Jeepers Creepers it was the wife!" I know that it has been made a joke that the husband looks submissive to the wife.

I remember the movies...one, which has this title if translated in English "There's No Strong Husband In A Smart Wife" and the other, "Mr. and Mrs. Smith" ...where the wives are smart enough to equal and even overcome their husband's strengths.

This is the real Jeepers Creepers. LOL. Bravo!

[Tom]

Thank you dhaye, yes indeed Mrs Tom is a strong lady but she also has a good sense of humour !!lol

[Chris]

Chuckling here... good ending. It is good to get family involved...makes everyone younger.

[Tom]

There's no doubt about that Chris & thanks again !

[Yellow Butterfly]

This was fun to read Tom... hope it does well in the comp.. :O)


YB

[Tom]

Thanks YB, so do I & Mrs Tom !