My cup runneth over..

A fellowship poem to see us safely into the New Year and onwards..

Though the well may be dry
no need to sadly sigh
and wither on the vine
For the challenge of life
in comfort or in strife
is to walk the righteous line

The spoils of decadence
soon rapidly condense
viewed through, discerning eye
If consumed by wanton greed
a heart cannot bleed
when little children cry

The corrupt and morally unshaven
seek sanctuary or haven
behind walls of ill-repute
But a house is not a home
if built on tainted loam
and will bear forth, rancid fruit

So take a leaf from the good book
don’t grapple on the hook
of avarice or imposition
For if the soul is pure
it is written de facto, de jure
your cup will overflow, through wise volition 😇

Reviews

[marilyn 1225]

I love this poem for the rhyme and advice ie fellowship as well your poem is written so well.. great words indeed and wise ones too your message is so clear, and I agree that we all need to hear the sound of a child crying or any human ... old or young.... in my opinion you have a heart and talent to give with your songs -- poetry

[Tom]

Thank you again Marilyn for your wonderfully uplifting appraisal of my little poem!

[Chris Shaw]

Words of wisdom here in this beautifully penned poem. I followed Cassie of the smiling face here Tom, and was delighted to have found such a gem of a poem. Loved the read. All good wishes.

Chris

[Tom]

Thank you for your thoughtful comment Chris 🍎

[Sami Khalil]

Those who heed all these wonderful 👏 advices will never be disappointed 😞.

[Tom]

Many thanks poet friend Sami 🍀

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome poet 😊 Tom.

[Cassie]

wow...The title drew me in and it did not disappoint. My cup runneth over

[Tom]

Yes, I hope it continues to do so, thanks again Cassie!1

[Neville]

You are of course, and as always, absolutely spot on Tom.......Neville

[Tom]

Cheers Neville, yep, you're on my level

[Neville]

bloomin hope so mate :)

[DIVYA]

In a time when only money is equated to success and happiness, this poem brings me much comfort and assurance that walking the straight path will lead to intangible rewards. The poem is replete with wisdom yet my favorite lines would be...

But a house is not a home
if built on tainted loam
and will bear forth, rancid fruit

The rhyming in every verse is so appreciated too...

Thanks for the lovely message and reminder Tom!

[Tom]

And as ever, thank you my friend for your welcome visit and beautifully worded review!

[DIVYA]

Thank you for such a refreshing read dear Tom.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So very true. Classic, lyrical poem with lovely form, cadence, rhyme, imagery and metaphor use. "Walk The righteous line"- yes. If not, what hope have we? "The corrupt and morally unshaven"-stunning. Love this excellent work!

[Tom]

Once again my friend, I am both humbled and honoured by your visit and inspired critique!

[andrew mitchell]

Lovely words Tom and with such smooth flow and rhyme. My first read of your work suggests you are talented lol Very polished work indeed, I shall crawl back to my drawing board quietly!!

[Tom]

Thank you Andrew for your welcome visit and kind words !

[Woody]

wonderful words even though cricket is not mentioned.
an inspiring poem my friend.

[Tom]

You'll never guess where I was whilst you were reading this ?

Reading you ! Lol.. Cheers Woody !

[Woody]

now that's creepy! ESP?

[Tom]

He, he...I like creepy ??