Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Snake snack

Snake snack

A Poem by ToneWolf
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continued playing with S I find it good exercise for my brain, much needed in fact.

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snake suggests something so sneaky

surely she simply shows some sanction

seductively silent skillfully slithering

suppressing sudden sentience

supplying savory sugar spice

shiny succulence

sanguine

success

© 2013 ToneWolf


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Excellent and ironic use of sibilance!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is excellently done!
This kept me smiling from beginning to end!
Nice work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


so many sssssss......and with a impressive meaning. that was a fun read^^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great alliteration and wonderful images. I enjoyed the tongue twister. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ha ha ha ..I thought you were offering me a recipe. But a tasty write.. God bless


Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

Whats Balut,
Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Don't gag. It's boiled native duck embryo. Reputed to have aphrodisiac effects but is also a healt.. read more
Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

Oh my goodness Thanks for the info but please I will pass.So help me God..
You have skilfully snaked this one in...Bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


ToneWolf

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...............
Can you imagine if we all talked that way and jumped from letter to letter in our conversations without losing a beat. ha I like the way you crafted the sentences and kept a fluid meaning without forcing any of the words. It's not always easy to convey something clearly when following a pattern such as this. I like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ToneWolf

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I am really not a schooled writer and I like to use this type of an exercise .. read more
Relic

10 Years Ago

You did a fine job regardless. You're welcome.
oh, please, please try it with Q!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ToneWolf

10 Years Ago

:) I did just for you.
This simply slithers and slides sublimely. Love the use of sanguine success.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ToneWolf

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words! I am obsessed with the letter s this week lol!

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Added on October 31, 2013
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ToneWolf
ToneWolf

Princeton, TX



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