Tears

read it and you'll know, p.s it was my first poem i was just scared to write it

My wrists cry for acceptation,
They want to be wanted.
They need the burn of steal
        to feel,
 anything at all.
Oh,how i fear to fall

Author's Note

what do u think

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well in very simple terms I have read two of your poem and you can write poetry. You definately have a wonderful feel for the emotion and the flow and structure.

[dreaming dame]

pain. This road is one of pain. Well written:) and well put

[Toni Blackerby]

thank u very much

[dreaming dame]

your welcome:)

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

Truly something I would have written

[Toni Blackerby]

then thats the best complement i could wish for

[Amanda J. S.]

This is sad, but really, really beautifully written!

[Toni Blackerby]

thank you very much