You're my poison

You're my poison

A Poem by Tony Jordan
"

- 'What's your poison?'

"
Oh darling, 
please
decant me
a chalice 
of 
you...

I will 
inhale
your heady
aroma

and 
sip from it 
for 
all
 my days.

I will giggle
like a teen
on bubbles
that tingle
my 
blood.

I will get tipsy;

ramble...
incessantly...

of how utterly
captivating
you are.

I will get drunk
on the brew
of your love
and 
never be
hung-over

~

for I will 
never 
sober of 
you

© 2016 Tony Jordan



Author's Note

Tony Jordan
toying around with pauses.

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stop trying to get me into romance, gotta keep the manly hermit act! i can't resist the lyrical beauty of unwavering passion like this!

(i once, long time ago, wrote something named "sinful summer club", i dont know why but this combined with the color red reminds me of it)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

Your edifices are crumbling from those tumbling and squelching cow carcasses Winter.
You'll .. read more



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And the same for lifetimes to come. True Love is like ambrosia that can poison someone. I am only trying to flow in your thought. Please do not mind if this doesn't look like a review. lol..An amazing write.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Your words - whether you consider them a review (which I do) are always welcome and appreciated Quee.. read more
That ending is infinite. Romantic form. This is the classic approach of love poetry!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Thank you Michael.
My cup runneth over with inspiration every time I see her, you might say.. read more
What a beautiful metaphor for true love...

....if only, all men felt this way.

Nicely penned.

Alisa

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Alisa.
I appreciate your visit very much.
Alisa Js

10 Months Ago

You are most welcome...likewise...

Wishing you well.

Alisa ;-)
Beware of the potent spirit within; we females almost always never show our strength until you've opened the bottle. :))

Beccy.

Posted 10 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

In this age of ubiquitous tattooing you'd think ...just a little one ...e.g. '80 proof' ...
T.. read more
Lets hope that she smells nice or you might recant your words. Valentine

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Wow - I love that wordplay Kathie. Very cool indeed.
I bet she smells like cocoa butter and s.. read more

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Tony Jordan
Tony Jordan

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