Loser

Loser

A Poem by Tony Jordan
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~ for Gorthi's Limerick competition ~

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The judge was called Gorthi Manasvini
A Limerick competition she was spinning
TJ entered a 'rick
That he wrote in a tick
With not a snowball in Hell's chance of winning.



© 2017 Tony Jordan



Author's Note

Tony Jordan
ignoble grammar problems

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aww this is really adorable and i enjoyed reading it!!

Posted 8 Months Ago


I cannot review this now, Tony :(
May the best Contestant win!
Good luck

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

I appreciate that Gorthi.
I'm glad you had the idea for the contest - it's fun writing limeri.. read more
very interesting, i like it

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

I'm glad you like it Rose.
Thank you for commenting.
I appreciate that.
:)
Angel of the devil

8 Months Ago

welcome tony.
np
I loved this Limerick poem. I have read something like this for first time. Good one.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

Here is a much better one by a fine writer (ReedWrite) here on WC - you should check her work out read more
Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

sorry here it is

The man’s from across the pond,
A cocky, blue-eyed blonde.<.. read more
Michael S

9 Months Ago

Ok. I will read.
Thanks for the share.
I like this poem backwards.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

Thanks Paul
:)
I love limericks...and this is a fun one.
Nicely done, Tony!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

It was him what started it Pammy...
:D
ReedWrite

9 Months Ago

LOL...uh huh...if you say so, Tony! :D
Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

*innocent smile*
Hi ... ;)
Limericks are awesome. I rarely post them here because no one reads them.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

James I agree - they are very overlooked form of poetry.
Limericks are so fun.
I wond.. read more
Very cute. Maybe you could teach me to limerick.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

Thank you KL - I could try.
I wrote a critique of a poet's attempts at limericks just last w.. read more
Lyn Anderson

9 Months Ago

hmmm okie I shall think on it, but I actually have to work today after two days of weather cancellat.. read more
Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

Work has a habit of impinging on artist's development. You know where I am.
Thanks again!
read more
Short. Bold. Clean strokes of breath, and a clever wrap. Nicely done, my friend

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

I love your review style Silente-E, thank you my friend.
;)
Even the losers get lucky sometimes.
TJ was not one of them.
Particularly fun ending

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

True...true..lol
Thank you Steve.

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Added on January 16, 2017
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Tags: limerick, competition, Gorthi

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Tony Jordan

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