Seeing Double

Seeing Double

A Poem by Tony Jordan
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It was inspired by seeing 'heavy petting' in another review. Just some fun with words

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I really want to 
love love
But I usually only
desire desire

I often pet heavily 
but not my pet
I would like to 
sex up sex (boo missionaries!)

I truly aspire to 
feel feelings
*thinking*
*thinking*
...how the heck can I close 
this...this... 

cr*p?

;P


© 2017 Tony Jordan



Author's Note

Tony Jordan
not to be taken ~ seriously ~ twice a day before meals

Captcha - dysbulic - means incomparable - lmao xD

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Ok, sometimes, we just have to be a bit silly. But WHAT FUN! I shall definitely be taking that twice a day before meals.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

I love playing with the meaning of words. Thank you for joining in Astri.
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SSR
Good work

I really want to
love
But I usually only
desire
I would like to
sex up sex (boo missionaries!)
I often pet heavily
but not my pet
I truly aspire to
feel feelings
*thinking*
*thinking*
...how the heck can I close
this...this...

cr*p?

;P

Sorry

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Thanks DP. why Sorry?
SSR

2 Months Ago

Nothing.:}
re your last lines, Tony..... see an opthalmographer about your poetic diplopia. Then re-write...right! :-D
Loved the way you can transform verbs to adjectives to nouns. Definitely dysbulic ..




Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

lol - I have been given tablets and specs Norman. Now I'm seeing triple !! Thank you very much for t.. read more
Seems like a dose of silliness was added in. Ha! One of the times I am not sure what to say, so will leave you with its effect: me, shaking my head at iPad and giggling :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Aaaaprilllll !! :)))
so good to see you back on WC.
This is pure silly, yes, haha.read more
Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

as you can see the 'read more' glitch is alive and well. What I did say was Thank you. It's great to.. read more
AprilRN1210

2 Months Ago

Lots of glitches still here, but appreciate the fact that old friends remain as well :) thank you an.. read more
Never search for love, love. It will come to you, you.
Though me thinks it should be, love, love, love. Cos the lawyer always sends you letters in triplicate.
Is that just me being cynical. No,no,no.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Thanks Paul. I appreciate your words. I agree - and it makes sense internally that love will come to.. read more
This is so funny & playful & tricky & startling! I love the way you repeat words to show the "double vision" theme. I love the way your message migrates from love to heavy petting to WHATEVER! (This is the part where the door is closed on the cameraman). Your uninhibited wordplay is inspiring! *smile*

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Thank you BG. I always remember the first time I saw the term 'heavy petting' in the swimming pool o.. read more
barleygirl

2 Months Ago

Hilarious! I had eight older sisters & brothers, so I derived my knowledge of the birds & bees by sp.. read more
Oh that is what that means. I wondered. I thought it had something to do with St Bernard dogs.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Stan Laurel and the pillow. Class!! lol
Nice one Ken
Tough deal, Tony. Methinks you've gone soft if you really want to take up "love love" hahah :P


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Lol I think it's even worse ;P you get infatuated with the idea of being in love and then keep falli.. read more
Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

I agree. We try so hard to understand what love is then we try to find it based on that (probably ve.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

lmao I was 'mum' until the word 'mum' came haha :P
I think you're right. Confusing love with.. read more
That first stanza typifies the human male--at least, for a very long time, this human male.
Once, I could fashion passion but never just scrap the crap and see fit to commit.
Now, I miss fashioning that passion.
"Seeing Double" is clever fun!


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

2 Months Ago

Lol - I like this review very much Jimmy. Thank you.

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