Have I (found poetry)

Sometimes words that seem unrelated can sing as one.

Better love 

alone

Paint;

stay;

mistake

Inhumane awhile 

okay Smiley-face 

well 

thanks

...thinking...

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Found poetry from WC user by name of "fake" - or rather their writing list the titles seemed to want to be together

- page http://www.writerscafe.org/Fake 

Helpfully the writings were numbered - a random picker program gave the sequence 6* 2 1 8 13 9 10 11 5 3 12 7 4

(http://numbergenerator.org/12randomnumbersbetween1and13)

The digit marked with asterisk was added to the front of the list afterwards due to only 12 numbers being available - (13 gave an 'invalid range' error.)

13  Stay

12  Well 

11  Awhile

10  Inhumane 

 9  Mistake

8   Paint

7   Thanks

6   Better

5   Okay

4  Thinking

3  Smiley-face

2  Love 

1  Alone

Reviews

[peter Duggan]

Hi Tony. I write words and find that so easy, but honestly i am totally confused when reading the words of many others. So I just write my feeble comments, and hope thy come out right. I enjoy reading your words, my friend, and wish i had your intelligence....Peter

[Tony Jordan]

Im humbled by your words Peter.
I dont see my writing or reviewing as particularly intelligent but maybe my hyper-sensitivity (bordering on an empathic overwhelm?) affords me a deeper look but it is a curse, believe me.
Thank you Peter. Much appreciated.

[Neville]

As far as I am concerned, you have poetry

[Tony Jordan]

I concur Nev.
Thank you my friend.
:)

[Pete]

if you haven't found it, it has certainly found you. good detective work you sly sleuth.

[Tony Jordan]

I do like that - 'it found you' - I do like that thought enormously. Thank you very much Pete.

[Jimmy Yetts]

You have assembled something quite akin to poetry.
A fascinating experiment!
(Will leave the legalities to lawyer types.)

[Tony Jordan]

It turned out randomly lyrical, I agree Jimmy.
I have contacted the word list owner and gotten permission to post this but he wants royalties !
=:0

[Jimmy Yetts]

Give him two ascots; they would be royal ties.

[DANGER]

It's your poetry.. weird poetry.. you're weird

Do you have any more like that go harder?? Maybe like riddle or something funny??

[Great Aunt Astri]

Plagiarism? I don't think any writing is completely original. Practically everything has been said before. So your 'poem' is non-sensical enough to be really good!

[Tony Jordan]

Sorry I missed this Astri.
I agree that much of what is being said has been uttered/thought/sang before in some form.
I appreciate your review of this one, thank you.

[Destiny_Brown]

I like this piece because it's a bit complex and also very thought provoking. I really enjoy art that diverts from the "normal" form and redefines the genre.

[Tony Jordan]

I like it because it got me thinking when I saw the titles listed.
Thank you Destiny.

[wordman]

it sounded like it is yours

[Tony Jordan]

Cheers W.M.
I was able to contact the poet who goes by the name 'Fake' and they gave me their blessing to use their titles in a 'found' poem so I guess - in this format/structure it is mine.
Thanks again, I appreciate your input my friend.
God Bless.

[wordman]

and you are welcome my friend

[Tony Jordan]

please bear with me if you've sent a Friend Request. I have 45 pending and am trying to work my way through them. Thank you for being so patient.

yours
TJ

[Chase Dylan]

Just accept them ALL...! Muahahaha... Then feed the unnecessary ones to the monster in the lagoon

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This can not be!! Approve mine at once, Tony! Lol 😛😎😎

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, approve it... THEN FEED HER TO THE LAGOON WITH A SPOON!

[Tony Jordan]

with a spoon - surely I would it if were June but in August at noon? nayyyy ....lol

[Tony Jordan]

Yumna - you'll have to be vetted like all the rest lmao

[Chase Dylan]

Nayyyyy, hahahaha.... Omfg... I cant stop laughing... Again... Killl meeee with a spoon to the monster in the lagoooon...

[Chase Dylan]

*Wipes tear away*... Yeah, this "Yumna" character seems suspicious...

[Chase Dylan]

i mean... Who REALLY has the word "Yum" in their name... Suspicious indeed...

[Tony Jordan]

That was that damned horse of mines butting in again - he ususally says neigh but he's been learning Spanish.

*sharpening spoon on grindstone* muwahahaa

[Chase Dylan]

Lmao... I... Have.... No... Words... I might die from mirth... But after that i will take a ride around El Diablo (I have named your horse)

Your spoon has nothing on my moon-glue

[Tony Jordan]

Tony sings ♪♫♬ "There's a kind of hush...all over the world..tonight..." ♪♫♬

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Heyy I lurve my name!! Loll dontcha say anything 'bout it! 😛😎😎😂
Seriously, Tony? You're savage 😎😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

moon-glue looks suspicious like man-sauce in the daylight Silente

El Diablo - lmao - quite fitting for a multilingual horsey. I likey...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

And I think Silente is not that Silent afterall lmao 😂😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

Yumna - you're name is lovely. Silente is laying word-mines in this page for me to trip over *BOOOM!!* - sh*t there goes another...

[Tony Jordan]

Yeah Yumna - let's rename Silente to something more appropriate - ermm.... Loude...? xp

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahah I know right! And I can't compete with that so carry on :p I got your back though hahah 😂😛

[Tony Jordan]

Fortissimo...?

[Tony Jordan]

and what IS he doing to my poor horse...they've only just met !!! grrrr...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Lmfaoo yeahh that would be fitting 😂

[Chase Dylan]

... Tony... Ssshhhh... The true causality of glue is a casualty of ruse... No man-sauce for you!
read more... Tony... Ssshhhh... The true causality of glue is a casualty of ruse... No man-sauce for you!

Hahahahahahahaha

I fight crime on demonic multilingual horseback... Away in the night we go... Spoons and hoods ready...

I think when they named you, Yumna, your mom had just eaten a bite of delicious pudding... Making her go "Yummmm" when the Doctor asked what they should name you... Then when he asked your dad, he said, "naaaa"
So... The Dr. just put them together, and voila... Yummmm-naaaa the Yumna was born

[Tony Jordan]

I will read more kind Sir
but your spoon souper powers remind of this dude in Mystery Men (The Blue Raja)

http://fork.motifake.com/image/demotivational-poster/1202/great-forks-wrong-forks-spoons-demotivational-posters-1328240188.jpg

[Chase Dylan]

I... It cut my message off... Then lagged forever and kept me off the site... This is a conspiracy against me... Lololol...

[Chase Dylan]

I ride a demonic multilingual horse who does not mess around... We fight crime at night.. One alley at a time...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Must be because you've been swimming in dangerous waters lately lmao 😛😂😂😂

[Chase Dylan]

I like Loude... That could be my next cover name...

[Chase Dylan]

Waters of treachery and conspiracy... Lagoon monsters, sharp spoons, funny names... A horse of mexican fury...

[Chase Dylan]

HAHAHAHA... That picture... New desktop background... !1/10

[Tony Jordan]

Loude the spoon flinging masked avanger on horse back with a mare (stallion??) who whispers back in various languages - hey it's got legs - the horse, that is ...lmao

[Chase Dylan]

Oh i am sorry... !!/10

[Chase Dylan]

LOL... Legs for days on my fiery stallion

[Tony Jordan]

Horses name aka the man-whisperer...mmmm...how about Pegaschmuck (it has arabian, mythological and jewish heritage)

[Chase Dylan]

..........

[Chase Dylan]

I will be Sir Grumble-a-lot, riding the fair haired Pegaschmuck...

Brilliant

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Grumbling - a - mumbling lol you guys are funny 😛😂

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - love that - the horsey has attitooood.
Sir Grumbles could murmur and mumble his opponents into a stupor then Pegaschmuck could flatten them with a wry cutting observation !

[Chase Dylan]

This needs to be its own stand-alone poem... Rofl
About the mis-adventures of Sir gumbles and his devious multilingual horse...

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Let's make a collab about it haha 😛😂

[Chase Dylan]

Nononono... This does NOT excuse you from having to come up with a UNIQUE topic for our collab'... Nice try

[Chase Dylan]

But... A collab between all 3 of us, hell yeah.. I will write from the horses perspective... Hahahaha... Except I am not multilingual...

[Tony Jordan]

Hah ! You are tricky Yumna but Loude is quicky-er

[Tony Jordan]

I'll write from the horse's a*s POV. I do anyway a certain lovely man says. Hahaha

[Dr. YumnaKay]

As if Tony would agree on a collab lol I highly doubt 😛
I thought I could trick you Loude 😛😂

[Tony Jordan]

collabs are for sociable peeps
*peers over cape* - muwahaahaaha

[Chase Dylan]

He seems to be collaborating rather seamlessly, right here and now on this very page... Seems like he might have already non-verbally agreed...
And if not.. i will just continue to gather remnants of his comments... That is sure to spark a book of gab...
You can not trick that which has no clue in the first place... Muahahhaa

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's... preposterous! Lol I'm more unsociable than you! *peering from under the bed 😂😂😂

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That would be cool, yeah! Just let him comment on and we'll make a 'found poetry collab' 😎😂😂

[Chase Dylan]

You both seem pretty sociable to me... Perhaps it is just my manish-moon-glue at work...

[Chase Dylan]

EXACTLY, he can not hide his wit from us, not for forever...!

[Tony Jordan]

Loude - you have my permission to gather all this - whatever - up and do what thou wilt with same.

Yumsters under the bed ...boo!

[Chase Dylan]

Oh. I will gather this and more... I can feel the urge to be silly gathering under me like a thunderhead of preposterous dismay

[Tony Jordan]

That would not be very spooky for kids - a monster under the bed that needed fed and just went 'Yum' all day - lmao

Oh I have hidden my wit up to now Loude - even ask the poor guys having to sit through this news feed ...lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah, I gathered you'd want to be the monster 😶😛😂

[Tony Jordan]

Hhaha - so you're like that girl in the Jaws poster swimming without a care in the world and theres a duuurty great shark of giddy on it's way up towards your mid-riff - haha - great imagery Loude !!

[Chase Dylan]

He IS going to write from the a*s'end... A true monster would want such things in order before eating childrens brains...

[Chase Dylan]

Lmao, not my imagery... Tis all your hidden wit at work, subliminally, of course... Shame I have to get ready for work soon... I would probably continue trolli... I mean trolling... Yeag I mean trolling reviews, lol

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah welcome to the world of trolling, Loude 😂 me and T have been doing this for ages now lmaoo 😂😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

One man's troll is another man's wonderful writer.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'll add this to my TJ quotes lol 😉😛

[Chase Dylan]

Lol, I can not even... Thanks for the fun yesterday, guys... Crazy, crazy peoplez...

[Tony Jordan]

the feelings mutual my friend :D

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're added in those crazy people now, Loude 😜😂

[Tony Jordan]

Loude ...?
what is a Loude?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Uhm seems like you're back to your senses today, TJ hahahah or maybe the hangover got off 😂😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

Oooh ...dont worry I remember now ...hahaa
Crazy indeed...how very dare you both
I'm as sane as ...well....as my favourite person on here *wink* - you know who...lmao

[Tony Jordan]

Wow! Galadriel is Ria !
It appeared on a review just now.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahahahahah hmmm well told ya already lol 😎😂

[Tony Jordan]

You called it right.
Detective Yumna. *salutes*

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Wait, your favourite person is thattt?! Lol 😛😎😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

Noooo...the other favourite person who thinks you're adorable !! hahahah

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hahaha then we have the same favourite person lol why did you have to remind me I'm adorable?! 😎 I know I am 😂😂😂😂😂😂

[Tony Jordan]

Well on account of it being Pakistan Independence Day Eve of course !!
Yes you are !! xD

[Dr. YumnaKay]

:p lmaoo feels good! 😜😂

[emmajoy]

Must be great to have nothing to do...

[Tony Jordan]

Haha - I know Em. Some people eh? ;)

[emmajoy]

Not saying a word, would I ever!

[Tony Jordan]

Now THAT's diplomacy in action.
Are ya watching Mr Trump...?

[Tony Jordan]

p.s. Two loin cloths for the price of one - I usually make do with the (teeny) chamois cloth
xD

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. I had read the ancient writers. Donne, Ben Jonson and Robert Herrick. The ancient writers wrote of love, life and death. We may add to their work. The love poems of Donne. Base for song and us to write freely and wild. Each of us steal a word or two from someone.
Coyote

[Tony Jordan]

Wow John thank you for that. I agree with your assessment my friend. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.