Behold !

Behold !

A Poem by Tony Jordan
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haiku

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the fire-ants showed the 
Master's of Earth, what it means
 - help one another

© 2017 Tony Jordan


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We never know who or what will be our teachers.
Accepting sound teaching, however, is a mindset human beings should, obviously, more readily adopt--thereby, continually enhancing their lives.
Topical, insightful and empathetic, Sir Tony of the House of Jordan.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

It's interesting that as kids we love to read filled with wisdom in stories involving animals but ca.. read more



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ants are an example set for humans of today. how unity helps you grow. fight for, and protect each other. The world needs this. Really good food for thought and a realization. its impressive how you drew an analogy between the two

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Irish wedding = alcohol
Alcohol = Irish men doing their 'dad' dancing
...as it has alw.. read more
pia

6 Years Ago

If you ever decide to go on a suicide mission and visit Pakistan then youll be defs invited
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Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Haha - well Pia, it sounds too good to miss.
Such a simple message, but so often forgotten. Thank you for the reminder, Tony Jordan.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Thank YOU Fanicia. I appreciate your comments.
Fanicia E.

6 Years Ago

Anytime :)
Good, I like this. Good job at making a bold point so simply

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Thank you DDee. I appreciate your review of this one.
:)
MoonChild

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome :)
Hi Tony,

I am always amazed at how nature teaches us so many life enhancing lessons, if we are only willing to receive..

This one you penned is a fine example ....

Sending you smiles across the miles...

Alisa ;-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

"...willing to receive..." - I like that - I like that very much.
Thank you Alisa. Thank you .. read more
Alisa Js

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome, my poetic friend from across land and sea.


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An imaginative interpretation of collective love and fellowship - kudos ... :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Fellowship - soemthing your stories are not short of Phill. Thank you very much for reviewing this o.. read more
Wise words. It makes one wonder how those little creatures know what to do. Lovely haiku.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

I have always wondered about those abilities Astri. It certainly is a topic for debate.
Thank.. read more
We never know who or what will be our teachers.
Accepting sound teaching, however, is a mindset human beings should, obviously, more readily adopt--thereby, continually enhancing their lives.
Topical, insightful and empathetic, Sir Tony of the House of Jordan.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

It's interesting that as kids we love to read filled with wisdom in stories involving animals but ca.. read more
I don't know if we humans will ever learn from animals, from nature, from all the wondrous that surround us... great and amazing piece my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

I guess some are aware and others choose to not be. Thank you for reviewing this one Light.
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Ah, seriously, I think we humans have more to learn from the little creatures than we do... So on point given the situation nowadays, Tony!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

ڈاکٹر' کریم' sounds so oldish lol *hugs back, old fella
Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Haha - you afraid of growing up Yumna - well then perhaps you can be called نوجوان ڈر. زل�.. read more
Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

damn ....was supposed to say 'young dr. olaf'
Your Senryu is so relevant and perfect. Everyday Heroes putting themselves on the line to rescue people and animals- shining examples to the sorry Masters of Earth, just there for another photo-op.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Tony Jordan

6 Years Ago

Sleeping in a warm dry bed has that effect on the 'suits' I guess Annette - they dont want to get th.. read more

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