Good Morning 2U2

How to properly wake a woman up....

Laying in the bed beside you, early morning light,
cascades into the window banishing all signs of night,
your sleeping frame presents to me an appetizing sight,
I’ll wake you up as only I can do, with sheer delight.

You’re underneath the comforter because of morning chill,
I gently ease it off prepared to give you more than thrills,
your sexy thighs define my eyes, they’re slightly parted still,
I drape your legs across my shoulders, zero movement, nil.

My face descends your waist, I breathe in deep your sweet’ning air,
the peaches that I plan to eat secrete a sweet’ning flair,
that trickles just a little, we can race I’ll meet you there,
my tongue becomes The One like Neo leaping through the air.

The 1st lick stirs your body lightly, is this just a dream?
Your womanhood’s dessert, I’m talking peaches AND the cream,
which seemingly’s inviting me to your forbidden seams,
you moan and then it’s quiet, I call THAT a silent scream.

The shock is wearing off and now the sound starts coming out,
your legs are softly tremb’ling as my tongue moves all about,
like surgery most certainly, but this aint Nip And Tuck,
I'll introduce my special skill, I call it “lick and suck”.

This means that simultan’eously my tongue as well as lips,
are working hard in tandem to dismantle your defense,
just a potent passing game I’m rackin up the yards,
I work that soft spot in your zone to make you scream for God.

See now that’s what you’re doing as we’re entering that stretch,
the sun is shining bright outside and yet you’re soaking wet,
souk soukie not a rookie, status labels me a vet,
you tremble like an earthquake as you squirt my lips and neck.

I latch on like a newborn baby latches on a tit,
you sudd’nly have the strength of 20 men, guess that was it,
you look at me astoundingly not knowing what to do,
I wink an eye and wipe my mouth, good morning to you too.

©2010
The Cunning Linguist

Author's Note

Written in 2010.

Reviews

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Damn..... you are quite a cunning linguist then aren't you? Although the sixth and the seventh stanzas don't fit the previously established rhyme scheme, or the rhyme scheme of the eighth stanza. Your particular choice of wording is very very interesting, and would be able to draw in many a reader, as there is something there for everyone it seems. Good work.