la Vida

la Vida

A Poem by Rick r

I missed my revolution.
What's a boy to do?
Don a balaclava for jaysus?
Smoke a fat havana?
Think I'll buy me a beret
brush up on mi español
grow a fumanchu
move fifty years down south
find me a spanish speaking babe
to dance the dance in a red dress
shouting viva la vida all night long
till the sun comes up
and roosters crow
at hungry dogs
in a dusty street.

 

5/24/14

© 2014 Rick r


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I like your poetic sensibility, Rick. The act of lifting your language, and sucking us in with all that imagery all that flowing red-fabric and, heavy living; to only set us down, gently even sadly onto that lonely dusty- street, for me anyway, was the anchor to your hook.

Nice work, here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick r

9 Years Ago

As always, thank you, Diego.
rick



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I like your poetic sensibility, Rick. The act of lifting your language, and sucking us in with all that imagery all that flowing red-fabric and, heavy living; to only set us down, gently even sadly onto that lonely dusty- street, for me anyway, was the anchor to your hook.

Nice work, here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick r

9 Years Ago

As always, thank you, Diego.
rick
i had fun reading this, very dreamy. nice write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rick r

9 Years Ago

:) I had fun writing it. Thank you.
sonnie ibadah

9 Years Ago

you're welcome ;)

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