Tune of the song

The ability of emotion lies in the depth of music in my soul

The ability to hear, feel or get to those emotions

Takes a great power of love and trust

The ability to gain those power's leading to myself

Takes a great amount of effort, strength, and sense

So if you think you are going to wander into my life

As easy as you're trying to make it seem

You have another thing coming to you

Because I have been through too much

Gone Through too much

To let anyone just wonder on in

I need to protect myself, my emotions, my soul, and the tune of the song.

Goodluck.

Reviews

[GunMetal]

Nice, it's like a disclaimer. It has plenty of attitude with just enough passion to get the point across. "Goodluck." What an invitation to a challenge. Excellent.

[girlnextdoor13]

I think we may get along well.

[NightsShade]

Great piece, I really enjoyed reading this. However I'm not sure if you meant 'wonder' or 'wander'. This is the only part that was slightly confusing. Great emotions :]

[deeps]

This is wonderful, I like this write. Emotions are clear and straight forward.

[gsethi]

Great start to the poem, drawing the reader straight in. I like how its more factual and numbing at once. :D

[Kon™]

I agree with 'Simpleasures', the up in your face attitude was a great centerpiece and drew me in to read the rest. You told the facts straight, yet nicely and effortlessly in a way that it was beautiful and touching, if that makes any sense. I really love the way you structured this poem. Wonderful job, keep it up! :)

[Simpleasures]

The love the in-your-face attitude of this piece. It's going to take somebody really special and one with patience to get your heart. Beautiful. The good luck at the end made me smile. They can't say you didn't warn them. : )