This Reverie

a little bittersweet love poem

The night was warm, yet bittersweet
Within your arms, my world complete
Yet in the morn, sun on the sheet
This dream replete, this dream replete,

Yes you my love, fulfill my night
Wrapped in your arms, and all is right
More than a dream, a stunning site
Passions delight, Passions delight,

For in my dream, your face I see
My love, my life, you’re this to me
Yet in the morn, I set you free
This reverie, this reverie,

And as I wake, although I try
To remember, I wonder why
That I am left, with no reply
You said goodbye, you said goodbye.

Reviews

[Audrey M.]

I LOVE this !! If your poem was a record my story could easily be the B-side to it. I really love your poem, Trace!!

[Trace]

I wrote this in an old fashioned method.
It was a fun write for me.
Im so happy you liked it.

Huggs, Trace.

[MsJewel]

Bittersweet, yes...gorgeous poetry..absolutely. I love the form you used. Is it a monetetra? I can't remember. Regardless, it is lovely. :) Julie

[Trace]

Thank you so very much my dear friend.
I Cherish your reviews.

Hugs.... Trace