Runaway

Runaway

A Chapter by Haru
"

Whisper farewells to those you leave behind.

"

                           My breathe was caught in my throat as I ran through the trees. Fallen branches snapped under my feet. Unfortunately, the one chasing me was just as fast. I could hear my heartbeat in my ears. The muddy ground suddently shifted under my feet and I fell hard. My eyes were of no use to me now. My body shook as the footsteps came all too close. I felt a cold hand grab my bare shoulder and a scream flew past my pale lips. The hand released me, but I screamed again. Their breathing sounded even, as if they had only been walking. I could no longer feel my body move. A sickly warmth grew in my stomache. Not bothering to lift my head, tears formed at the bottom of my light eyes. I was caught.

 

                           There was faint breathing and a soft slamming sound. My ears twitched. Was I in the hospital or the bed I ran from? I lifted my right arm slowly and draped it over my eyes. My entire body felt heavy and sore. The fall must have taken its toll on me when it had the chance. A small gasp made my eyes snap open. My arm was a shield from any lights around me. Hushed voices made my ear burn. I couldn't have been in the hospital. Something warm touched my shoulder. I jumped back, sending myself sideways. When I hit the floor, the sidetable fell next to my head. A plastic lamp rolled across the floor. All footsteps around me stopped. I groaned, not moving from my place on the floor. Thick silence filled the room. My mind turned blank.



© 2009 Haru


Author's Note

Haru
Please ignore grammer problems. What do you think? Sorry it is so sort.

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I agree this is really short, but dude, you've written two paragraphs that could kick any of my writing's butt. I'm so jealous right now, but I have to read request this to my friends.
Tata, and I hoped this wasn't a waste of time,
NykkiC

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it. Awesome imagery.

Posted 14 Years Ago


cool.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm likin this. Your imagery is amazing. Keep it up! XD

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow this is amazing.
Great Job

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really like it..your writing is great..would love to read the rest

Posted 14 Years Ago


It is really short but the 2 paragraphs are really powerful. The detail is rich and I love it. Your writing style and the flow is lovely and I loved reading it. My only question, is there going to be more?! Because I would love to read more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


beautifully written. it's so loud in the room right now, but i could still shun everything out and hear only these words flowing through my mind. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


awesome beginnig! rlly loved the first paragraph....ur a great writer =]...hope you continue the book

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this. I enjoy your writing :]. Keep up the good work Haru.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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