Change

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A Poem by Tree Bark
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you know my greatest fears, you've known me through the years
you know i never swear, you know what i usually wear
you know my life story, yet you'll take my glory
you've changed how you speak, you've changed how you act
you've changed what what you talk about, you've increased what you lacked
you've changed your friends, you've changed how you dress
you've become more needy, you've become more stressed
you've changed your hair, you've changed the eyes
you've changed your smile, you think your a prize
you've changed your look, you've changed what you could
you've changed what you do, you've changed everything about you
you've changed more than i knew you would...

© 2011 Tree Bark


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this is relatable because my friend also changed so i stopped talking to her since she kept spreading rumors about me that were of coarse not true.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this! It's so true-friends change and you can't get used to it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It seems to be a feeling of sadness yet understanding at the same time. "Things don't change. People do." And that is the truth isn't it? My favorite line is "you've increased what you lacked", because it has that quality in it that gives a small edge to my curiosity. Who is this person? Why has this person changed? Questions like this taht cannot be answered unless by assumption makes your poems all the more appealing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


you also doo?? TELL ME!! coz i think i forgot

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this one :DDDD I feel like I know who its about

Posted 12 Years Ago


you do?? :o

Posted 12 Years Ago


so good and i think i know who you're talking about...
=3

Posted 12 Years Ago


i love this poem...lots of people can probably relate to it well i know i can so awesome job...!!!! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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