Forgotten

Six word story.

Past tears, memories fading in time

Time, in fading memories, tears past.

Author's Note

Definitely not my normal kind of piece, written for a challenge: write a six word story that can read left to right or right to left and make sense both ways.

Reviews

[Zahra]

Cool, nice wordplay. Well penned!!!

[L. Fenella]

Great story! Kind of like a palindrome

[Coffee Vampier]

Beautiful, Perfect for the contest i saw you submitted. What gave you this idea for you to create a challenge such as this? I Love who the two lines correlated but not actually meaning then same thing. Great job I would love to see more of your work :)

[Treo LeGigeo]

It came from a group on deviantart. I'd never done a six word story before, but it immediately peaked my attention. Thanks!

that will be the day ...

[RG]

Loved it!

[blakjassy]

that is a great challenge and you have dealt with it so well! Fantastic!

[lawrence bear]

this is an excellent piece. I love it.

[Lively]

Awesome!

[stars are far]

really nice ..
lots of things could be written based on this :)
great work

[Just Brooke]

Wow this is really cool and creative! I love it=]