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A Poem by Treo LeGigeo
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Six word story.

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Past tears, memories fading in time



Time, in fading memories, tears past.

© 2013 Treo LeGigeo


Author's Note

Treo LeGigeo
Definitely not my normal kind of piece, written for a challenge: write a six word story that can read left to right or right to left and make sense both ways.

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This is really good! I love how it can be read both ways and yet not sound forced or awkward. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked this poem and the words that were used were powerful and reading this poem both ways emits strong emotions well done

your light shades my darkness

Ashley Black

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, makes stop and read it again and again. It works both ways! EXCELLENT!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very true. For now life can seem hard to bear, but other times its better.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like how which ever way you read it, it still tells the same story. Brilliant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice wordplay.
In its own way, I'd say it really is something

Posted 13 Years Ago


the loop forged inside the beating heart~memory memorialized~

Posted 13 Years Ago


i like your very very much, you were nice and creative with it! good luck! 10/10

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice, I love the words you chose, and the little variations on the end. Really awesome job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job on this challenge :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Treo LeGigeo
Treo LeGigeo

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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I'm from Australia, so some people may find that I spell things differently. I love writing and have had a couple of publications of short stories and novellas under a pseudonym. I started .. more..

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