Stage made for two?

Life upon my stage,

The lonely star but all things change.

As I walk never changing pace,

I turn and see her face.

Beauty undefined,

This will remain for I shall not try.

My feeble words could never describe,

Nor even dignify.

Safe to say she caught my eye,

Pulled me in with a mere glance

Is this fate?

Or  happenstance?

A familiar burn within my breast,

A swift return from nothingness.

Perhaps what they say is true,

 all stages are made for two.

With all the courage I can invest.

I shall see what happens next.

Reviews

[The Old Ashes]

Oh this goes PERFECT with the story "trouble"!
you should put the two together- it will add such an effect to the story.
I like your poetry, I think you are strongest as a poet after reading this.
Keep up the great work.
P.s.
you should add this too the end of "trouble"
100/100

[Helpless]

genius! your a really talented writer for sure!

[Geralyn Miller]

Nice flow, sweet words, hopeful feeling--I like!

[SilentSKY]

Wonderful! I loved it- it had good feeling, and made you feel what the poet (you, lol) felt.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Interesting, it pulled me up on stage with you. Good meter and rhyme and well written.

[Im His Daughter]

wow this is good! Great job

[Calypso]

Just amazing. I could feel the love the actor had for the actress. This is wonderful. You should put it in contests, I'm sure this piece could win a few awards.

[Marie Harrison]

Loved the rhyme and flow of this poem. Great jobl90

[Linear]

Ah Cupids arrows fly so swift, strike deep for the women we meet,
Good flow to your poem, well constructed

[Jeff]

Great piece. Perfectly expressed.