Stage made for two?

Stage made for two?

A Poem by CrashDavis47

Life upon my stage,

The lonely star but all things change.

As I walk never changing pace,

I turn and see her face.

Beauty undefined,

This will remain for I shall not try.

My feeble words could never describe,

Nor even dignify.

Safe to say she caught my eye,

Pulled me in with a mere glance

Is this fate?

Or  happenstance?

A familiar burn within my breast,

A swift return from nothingness.

Perhaps what they say is true,

 all stages are made for two.

With all the courage I can invest.

I shall see what happens next.

© 2010 CrashDavis47


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Oh this goes PERFECT with the story "trouble"!
you should put the two together- it will add such an effect to the story.
I like your poetry, I think you are strongest as a poet after reading this.
Keep up the great work.
P.s.
you should add this too the end of "trouble"
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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genius! your a really talented writer for sure!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this goes PERFECT with the story "trouble"!
you should put the two together- it will add such an effect to the story.
I like your poetry, I think you are strongest as a poet after reading this.
Keep up the great work.
P.s.
you should add this too the end of "trouble"
100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow, sweet words, hopeful feeling--I like!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful! I loved it- it had good feeling, and made you feel what the poet (you, lol) felt.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting, it pulled me up on stage with you. Good meter and rhyme and well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow this is good! Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Just amazing. I could feel the love the actor had for the actress. This is wonderful. You should put it in contests, I'm sure this piece could win a few awards.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved the rhyme and flow of this poem. Great jobl90

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ah Cupids arrows fly so swift, strike deep for the women we meet,
Good flow to your poem, well constructed

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great piece. Perfectly expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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CrashDavis47
CrashDavis47

denver, CO



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Im an aspiring author, what i want to do in life is write novels. Im trying to take a serious go at this so please comment and critique my writing. anything to help me be a better writer is welcome more..

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