Thoughts in moments

Thoughts in moments

A Poem by Steven
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confused in grey, sad poems, deep times

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What can a jest of life cause in a person?

can the wind comfort a lonely sit?

If a company on none can suffice an idea of peace,

then when do others cause the distraction of comfort?

Tears know no purpose in this transaction lacking in novelties.

"A journey here by slow means of transportation."

  Every clock strikes grey,

after the light of rain gives way.

Thoughts of past gain futures weight.

The voice quotes "beat" in every decaying reaction of experienced moments.

 So what's the deal?

If the one who has said these moments,

will never speak my good friend Neil?

 


© 2013 Steven



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"Every clock strikes grey,
after the light of rain gives way.
Thoughts of past gain futures weight."
I like those lines the most in this well penned write...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Steven

4 Years Ago

thank you for the comment. ill return the favor.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
I couldn't get my time to read your story's but, i'll as soon i could.
This's nice "Thoughts of moment's"'re good to read and you attracted someone to float in your words. Your this below one stanza's quite interesting to read.
Tears know no purpose in this transaction lacking in novelties.
"A journey here by slow means of transportation."
Every clock strikes grey,
after the light of rain gives way.

but, hey, i want to say that in your this line" So what's the deal?", you should have to replace it with this line " So, what's a big deal ? Hope it'll work for you.


Posted 4 Years Ago



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Steven
Steven

havelock, NC



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I write stories that will tell me how people are from there questions and responses. don't know how to get this dang picture right side up! more..

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