Mists of Spring

Walking though Hampshire countryside at the conception of its dawn, inhaling natures beautiful awakening from her hibernation.

Mystical mist covers this earth

 

carpeting the ground in its magical mirth

 

Silence hanging in the air of the day to be

 

languidly lifting its veil to see

 

beauty in nature laid naked before me

 

bows to the bowers lifting my soul

 

spring birthing to winters devoid hole

 

trees mighty wakening

 

humbling to the immensity of creation

 

the earth is arousing its picture of birth

 

painting its art on canvass of earth

 

tattooing its omniscient scripture in skin

 

This mighty awakening has now to begin...

Reviews

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend From Across the Pond,
Are you sure you are not of First Nations descent? When I read the word tapestry it rang of Red Blood. It is not often I find a pneuma that can express the truth and pulse of nature, very well done. I especially loved the line, “humbling to the immensity of creation”. Isn’t it wonderful to feel so small? And I liked your choice of word when you used the word “Mirth”. I had to look up its definition as apparently this musher has been living under a rock. I posted its definition below in case there might be at least one other whom might find this helps them understand your vibrant tapestry.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


mirth |mərθ|
noun
amusement, esp. as expressed in laughter : his six-foot frame shook with mirth.
DERIVATIVES
mirthful |-fəl| |ˈmərθfəl| adjective
mirthfully |-fəlē| |ˈmərθfəli| adverb
ORIGIN Old English myrgth, of Germanic origin; related to merry .

[TrimarcoRansome]

Yes gladness and happy is the meaning of mirth. It is not a word used very often today but as you know I do like the old way of things! My origins are Mediterranean/English yet I often feel a deep seated connection with nature, previous life maybe!! Thank you for reading and reviewing my work, Laughing Bear. A pleasure to read your comments as always.

Helen

[Tate Morgan]

Ah the morning mist such a friend to you in your country You are truly a jewel in this cafe

[TrimarcoRansome]

You are getting to know me well, Tate! The countryside does inspire the best in me so I do write about it a lot!!

[SeaBreezes]

Wow its like you described the earth and it was very good.

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you for your kind comment!

[SeaBreezes]

No problem at all;)

[lothlorienwriter]

Welcome Trimarco good poem and also welcome back to John who will tell you all about the magical mystical mists and myths too, where have you been?

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you! I comfortable already!
Helen

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you! I comfortable already!
Helen

[TrimarcoRansome]

Thank you, I am most at home already!

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Firstly welcome to the WC! Secondly I love the way you lift the veil on spring with a clarity and crispness, a fresh piece and awoken me it has indeed.