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Just had a thought and came up with this. Hope you guys enjoy my writing style. :)

Paint the sky to your demise,

sing a song that makes all your fears wash away,

Don't shed a tear with sorrow,

But make it into strength,

That no body can break. 

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

My fav. lines: "Don't shed a tear with sorrow,
But make it into strength,"

I must say, you write a very deep piece (as usual a beautiful one does)... with all of your heart. Yeah, time brings everything whether happiness or sadness .. it ain`t matter, what does matter is ..how we all heal it all up to.. please the state of hearts. Very bright imagery that`s pen`d up with your pearly emotions. Excellent work!

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked my work. ;-) xx

[icelandicblue]

Unbreakable strength is a character trait life will test but setting the foundation will always help when weathering the storms.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it very much. :-)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So Beautiful I love these lines.



''Don't shed a tear with sorrow,

But make it into strength,

That no body can break''



thank you for sharing this wonderful
piece and stopping by my page.



God bless. Benita

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Thank you so much, and your welcome. :-))

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the strength and positive feel of the words. I like the use of paint to create safe place and hope. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Thank you so much again. It means a bunch. :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

:-) .............

[Soundsage090]

I am in agreement 100% with Wordsmith's review! Also there seems to have unspoken lines whispering in between the ones you have spoken. For example> "Paint the sky to your demise"

Demise- 1. Death 2. The end of existence or activity; termination.

< this to me joined with" paint the sky to YOUR"
Seems to suggest that by "Painting the sky" Is like I am singing towards the sky with words that paints the storm of past tears and sorrows. Then "To your demise" gives me the feeling of a paradigm shift, death, beliefs, and end of a false sense of self"ego" by the act of painting it with words and creating a visual release.

The next line continues to express and strengthen the first > "sing a song that makes all your fears wash away,"
Its as if the first line made the storm by painting the sky through the demise (letting go). As if the first line produced the rain that is washing away the rest of what has died(let go; fears). At this point the visual has led up to looking like this > A person crying and shouting at the sky. The words they are shouting are like a confession and release in the form of dark clouds that blinded there vision. With each word the person shouts, the way he/she once thought dies. All these words then make a Storm{painting in the sky) symbolizing what Used to hold them back(fears). Then the cloud breaks open and begins to rain, So the Painter begins to sing a song with Tears of Joy. As the act of Transmutation of what once was tears of sorrow are transformed into lessons and strength.

I Love this Much gratitude for This gift you shared. Great art!

[&#9812; CrownedDevil &#9790;]

Thank you so much, and taking the time to read it. :-))

[A. Amos]

Short and powerful...well done!

[&#9812; CrownedDevil &#9790;]

Thank you so much, I really appreicate it. :-)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...