Her Despair

"Her Despair"

Shattered her heart,
Broke her trust.
Gave her pain,
and now she's in vain.

Her face shows despair
Her life is unfair
Cuts are marked on the arms,
Bruises embedded on the legs.

She puts on a brave mask,
but her appearance doesn't fool.
All she wanted was to fit in;
but didn't think it would ruin her skin.

Though she accepted this fault-
this fault that had her constantly weep.
Labeled EMO was part of her choice,
making it hard for her not to send plees..

Author's Note

Tell me what you think of this piece by commenting please :) I'm new to this website so please bear with me here lol thanks.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Wonderfully told love! A label seems hard to bear at times....people seldom see what is beneath! Great work! xx

[flutist44]

Love it- so well written, so much emotion- great work!

[deeps]

WOW this is really amazing, I sincerely loved this.
Perfect flow and rhyme scheme. Loved the truth penned in this.

[Aercastle]

Despair, indeed! Alienation, and this outward reflection. I'll bear with you, waiting to read more of your work.

[SinnerInspired]

It has a nice rhythm to it Its true captivating Nice work