7

7

A Poem by Joshua Hood
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this is an attempt to come up with some religious material, increase one word a line.. ended on 7 because its the holy number.. so sorry its short hopefully it wont take away from the meaning

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individual
 its   visual
needs no miracle
have faith in spiritual
but can't escape the ritual
listen to lies till their believable
hell burns, but heaven is just unthinkable

© 2010 Joshua Hood


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Really good attempt. Your words are honest and challenging. You are right, mankind have complicated spirituality with burdens and cruel doctrines.

I was particulalry interested in your last line.

You might be surprised to know that there is no such place as a burning "Hell." It is a development of the historical churches. Can you imagine Jesus, the "Prince of Peace" roasting a person over a hot fire?

Just a thought.

Good writing.

I wish you peace

Posted 4 Years Ago



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