Only A Myth

My other gem, A poem I really like and have gotten real positive feedback on

Only a myth

 

Time after time, tear after tear,

And all the make-up, with smear after smear,

All of these boys too busy looking in a mirror,

To realize what a great thing they had right here.

These boys don't realize what they posses,

And give these angels less and less,

And instead of striding for progress,

They leave them tangled in a distorted mess.

Again and again how stupid can you be,

To mess up something with the true defintition of beauty?

Again and again they come crying to me,

Complaining about the male immaturity.

And I just try and shelter them from the hurt,

And from these idiots who aren't alert,

And lie or cheat or misuse their flirt,

And constantly treat them like dirt.

As tear after tear falls from their eyes,

From the pain from the male's lies after lies,

They wish for the male's demise,

And tell me I am the only truly good man among all these guys.

All of these girls I would be lucky to find someone like to be with,

Yet again and again I am missed and dissed,

As they end up again and again with men who treat them like s**t,

Because truthfully women know that one perfect man is only a myth.

 

Reviews

[Lydia]

Beautifully written and great flow. Awesome job.

[Galyen]

its good i like how you used the rhyming but not to much of it good job