True Love

An entry for A Little Joy poetry contest.

 I lean in close to taste your kiss,

I spend, with you, a moment of bliss.

 My tongue, it buzzes, like a mosquito,

When I consume my gooey burrito.

Author's Note

When you are forced to wear a bib to eat it, it's a food worth marrying! Leave your reviews and comments!

Reviews

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

hahaha this had me cracking up. you're hilarious.

[Carrie]

This made me happy. Quite charming. I would really appreciate it if you could come check out my work, I'd like to inspire an emotion in someone as you did I.

[Lisa Bland]

Good poem it brought a smile to my face.

[IamOne]

This made me smile. And in the end, there's no greater gift given by the written work.

[Chris Micha]

Dang you had me going one direction and them twist me around in another! Awesome job! :)

[Aethereal]

Food is rude, but after all you're eating it, and so it has a reason to be angry. Oranges concur!

[Roger Turgeon]

Ok I should have looked at the photo first....didn't see the burrito coming....thanks for the smile it brought to my face ( : O )

[Margo Seuss]

Haha!!! I actually debated about whether or not to add the picture of the burrito just for the shock value! In the end, I had too much fun looking at delicious burritos!

[Roger Turgeon]

I'm going to file that under "a woman who is easy to please" LOL

[Frontier]

Ahh...food, the pleasure that never leaves us, that never fails. :)

[Margo Seuss]

Hunger is amost ambivalent relationship!

[Relic]

I ate two in a row at work one time. Never again. I spent an hour in the bathroom the next day,

[Margo Seuss]

Oh dang!!! But it was worth it, no? I had me a burrito just this afternoon. They are bliss....until they hit the bowel...

[Relic]

At the time it was, that's why I ate two. haha Wow, if I had only known.