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Rebekah's Epitaph

Rebekah's Epitaph

A Poem by Twilight Dancer

She traveled many paths,

And loved, cared, and hurt for many souls.

But the greatest love and the most narrow path,

She reserved for God.

 

TD 8.15.2007

© 2008 Twilight Dancer


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This is very beautiful! It is quite a miracle how you describe yourself in only these four lines. Your choice of words reveal more than the central idea alone.
"narrow path" - This says so much. ...Of not only what God and love mean to you, but what life means to you as well.
I loved this piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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So noteworthy is this that it could have come straight out of scripture Rebekah, just beautiful and extremely well set out. Thought provoking and sensitive...it should be framed in gold xxx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Another perfect reflection upon the fact that wide is the path, but narrow is the gate...what beautiful words chosen to embrace the creator at the time of his calling...
Todd

Posted 15 Years Ago


Short sweet and to the point with a very clear message, this is your epitaph? Gutsy lady always.
Love,
Helen xxx

Posted 16 Years Ago


With words she proved
Her love of God
Now she stands
A lightning rod
To show the way
For others to pray sf

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wondrous words written perfectly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

"she hurt for many souls"
this is so beautiful. i love reading your poetry.

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

simple yet beautiful...

soul-enriching...




the fool............................................................................................................................

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

just beautiful

Posted 16 Years Ago


5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Wow! It is a beautiful epitaph.

Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.


First of all the icon-picture that you chose is breathtaking. I love sunsets. Then the words that you chose were even better. . . .

"But the greatest love and most narrow path,
She reserved for God"

Words to live by, my friend. The whole piece - 4 lines - speak volumes.
Great work



Posted 16 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.


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