How I feel About You

Such a strong feeling

so tender and pure

How to explain it all

I'm not quite sure

I struggle with the words

But none of them seem to fit

I try to piece something together

Bit by bit

This is too strong of a feeling

So beautiful and new

Not one term in our vocabulary

Would even begin to express

The way I feel about you

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

this reminds me somewhat of how do i love thee.. let me count the ways as you struggle to define the feelings you have ,, a love poem with passion.
Chloe
xoxo

[Jason Young]

I stumbled across this when I was reading the entries to a contest to see which one I liked best. This was definitely up there. It's not vastly descriptive, and it's pretty short, but I like it for the simplicity and emotion of it. The voice is strong, and the emotion peeks through very well. I can see just how pleasantly confused you are by this new feeling- love.

I haven't read all of the other entries, so I don't know if I'll vote for this one... But it's definitely up there. Good job! Keep up the good work.

[DarkIriswriter]

a really eccential rhyming I love the description adn the emotion you placed into it.Great work

Sara