Images and Illusions

The last line isn't really true..I forget my dreams..A LOT of the time. lol. But I usually can keep the good ones in there by writing them down as soon as a wake up.

Making no sense

These silly pictures of my head

I close my eyes

and see them as I lay in my bed.

I'm content to stay here

and watch these illusions go by.

I feel so free in this place

Like I could jump up and fly.

I can't understand these things,

they really don't make any sense.

They're so far from reality,

they're not held in by a fence.

I watch the images as they pass through my mind,

Though my eyes are closed, I am not blind.

Sometimes happy and sometimes not,

my dreams stay in my memory

they're not to be forgot.

Author's Note

(I got carried away with the colors and font and stuff..hehe.)

Reviews

[Sasavet]

Aw yes, daydreams are often so abstract and odd they make no sense at all, I love the colours in this too :P. All I can say is maybe take away the rhyming, because I found it restricted your words a lot. Sometimes it works, but in this I found you could have used much better words but the rhyming wouldn't allow it, but I do like this :)

[GetTheHellOut]

A wonderful piece. I love the colours and fonts ^,,^ Really engoyed it.

[Dani California]

This is cute Lauren :)
I really enjoyed it... and I like the colors!!
They really add character ....
so, do you dream in color?

I love the creative intent.
You have an artistic mind my friend.. :)

Great job!

[Nely Amorim]

yea the colors can be a little hard on the eyes when reading but I do sympathise with your dreaming, I also wake up with some vivid and sometimes very bizarre dreams, mostly I can't even begin to interpret them..lol. well composed and very good effort :)

[ape domenigoni]

this is really great!!! i do like the fonts and colors ;)

[Kitty]

I love the colours and the font change. Makes it feel like a happy colourful dream. I really enjoyed this piece!

Great write!!!

Josie

[Orlando Murcia]

'' Though my eyes are closed
I am not blind "

I liked this part
I also agree with the guy below me
great format

Awsome poem

Orlando M

[BjH]

Great format

i like this line..... "and watch these illusions go by."

its like some kind of childrens nursery nightmare

yours

benjamin