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For Computer Geeks :P

Cycling at impressive speeds,

faster then the greatest steeds.

The CPU is the main brain,

as it cycles, again and again.

With every Bit and Every Byte

Transfered at a speed beyond sight,

Everything works like clockwork,

until something goes berserk.

This is when the swearing begins,

and when it gets under our skins!

While logic and reason is our key,

 never forget simplicity!

It speaks in a simple way,

that is translated in a single say

One for yes, Zero for no

that is all you need to know.

It is a great creation of our time,

But never forget in our prime,

There is a limit what it can give,

For it never be truly creative

Author's Note

This is strictly for computer geeks...Attempt to write a poem about a random subject given from a friend(without mentioning that I'm writing a poem).
Also, the title can be decoded.

Reviews

[Annette Jay Sweeney]

What an interesting piece! I like the view you take on computers. Rhyming poems aren't often my favorite, but I liked how you rhymed in this poem. Very nice! My only concern are these two lines:

"But logic and reason is our key,
but never forget simplicity!"

Using "but" at the beginning of two lines in a row is kind of distracting. Maybe try cutting one out or using a different word?

[Jessica Mai]

I'm not a computer geek but i really like this! Its different and made me chuckle a few times! I love the last 2 lines and overall I found this awesomely awesome.

[R. Nella]

Since you wrote it for the geeks, I feel compelled to point out that every bit and byte is not transferred at the speed of light within the CPU, which is what I assume is being referred to as a continuation of the subject of the first quatrain.

Other than the minor factual inaccuracy, which may one day become fact, I enjoyed it. Computers cannot replace humans, no matter how powerful they become. I am not a fan of the term 'artificial intelligence', as biological behaviour can never be modelled to the level of detail required for a machine to ever be as unpredictable as a brain.

[lamia]

cycle ( i searched for it ;) ) , it's good to write about something new

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

@Annette Jay Sweeney Thanks, I just fixed that now =). Also, the title decodes to the word "cycle" which was my original name for the poem. Search for a binary to text converter, or work it out yourselves.

[Scandalous]

I love it! And I'm not just saying that because I am a computer nerd ;)

[zombiikillah666]

This is good and really witty. good job! (:

[Gomer LePoet]

cool piece here not sure what anser you are looking for here. is this your phone number? you did not leave the area code however, so I cannot call you.
It would have been cool if it came out like the song Jenny 867-5309

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

Thanks Devons you've been really helpful...and cheering =) send read requests if you want me to read any particular poems, I'm kina tied up on time.