Bill and Sue.si

Bill and Sue.si

A Poem by eli mercuree rue

the Court.man.dated
thirt.E.2wo pink pills
to the gir.eel with
thirt.E.2wo half.way
kills taken.out on the
town of Green.back,
Oak.Lay.Homo's
last standing Bill whom
happened to be the
biller of do as and
do ont's as an atam.impt
to gain the affect.ion
of: pursue, spark, woo
little babies into
the womb of his wife
Sue.Si [with an iiieye]
for her last fatal
BloW,

Twas a hard job
fo' sho.

 

 

© 2008 eli mercuree rue


Author's Note

eli mercuree rue
guy buys girl girl leaves home girl kills guy after guy carries her like a possession court kills girl the end

haha

or something like that

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i cant figure out the 32 pills part...i get that the court mandated them...i get the man dated...hmmm he wants to impregnate his wife susie...so maybe fertility drugs...um

to do's and don'ts...
32 halfway kills- 16?

perplexing...truly.

i'd love to know
the
thought pro.cesspool
behind this



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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so...hmmm
i'm trying once more
cuase you said to

k shot in the dark here...
but does the 32 refer to the pill marking... perhaps a pill that helps someone who is incapable of pregnancy becuase of a disease she has...like muscular distrophy or something...and so her husband goes to court cause he wants a kid
but the docs are like dude, no way your wife can carry a baby to term
but he's all like
well try this medication
and so the judge is all like sad and s**t that the guy wants to have kids with his wife but cant
so the doc allows the drug to be administerd to the woman
so she can concieve?
and so they go through with it
and the pregnancy is
her fatal blow?

or is it not so much the markings on the pill
and it's a fatal blow cuase it completely ruins her life?

damn...i'm just thinking of the book
thinking of recent conversations
and still coming up empty...

help a girl out...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

i cant figure out the 32 pills part...i get that the court mandated them...i get the man dated...hmmm he wants to impregnate his wife susie...so maybe fertility drugs...um

to do's and don'ts...
32 halfway kills- 16?

perplexing...truly.

i'd love to know
the
thought pro.cesspool
behind this



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

i'll review when istop laughing


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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