love shone (shown)

a romantic description of a woman's face radiating love

the moon is a mere backdrop, to the face I gaze upon, your softly spoken beauty, shimmers glowingly, I pray a reflection of my own, my eyes take in your radiance, there can no words tell, what my eyes take in, maketh my heart to swell, in this soft loving moment I am more than blessed, for what man knows that looking into the face of love, his heart has been caressed, this soft sweet tender moment has long been spent, yet til this day I longingly yearn for a lovelight heaven sent 

Author's Note

i haven't learned to publish my lines correctly yet forgive me :(

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'love shone (shown)
Kent Rawski,
This shares the feeling of a open faced caring and a unhindered nurture for the moon is the open reflection of life giving sunlight. The whole poem gives this same feeling, a desire to see honestly reflected caring given openly and not hidden. Beautiful and inspiring. Oh how I do love the night and it's own rare unique grace!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very beautiful, and emotional, and deep. I like the way you build the poem, it sounds like inner awareness..
shimmers glowingly" is very lovely.

[Kent Rawski]

My my the nuances that can be perceived by the emotions connected to our mind thank you kindly

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Without the lines breaks this reads as a very romantic piece of prose. Your words capture the radiance of love beautifully.

[Kent Rawski]

Ty Edie life has its glorious moments

[Laura Kate]

This is lovely, I love how you bring in a psychology of reflection which some research shows humans need in order to feel whole. Also I like that this light is given by the feminine moon and not the masculine sun. I have a lovely image of a man with a full heart looking longingly up to the night sky, safe under his love's shine.

[Lea Sheryn]

This is beautifully stated.

[Kent Rawski]

thank you It doesn't happen everyday

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Excellent opening you go big, with the moon then reel us in, declaring its greatness a backdrop to Love.
Your words are smooth, lovely and your closing line a model for romance.

[Kent Rawski]

thank you Cherrie I think you are fond of opening lines the writer in you

[Cherrie Palmer]

I am, it sets the mood and beckons the reader.

[Chris Shaw]

What a beautiful poem. Full of romance. He is mesmerised indeed. No mistake about it.

Chris

[Kent Rawski]

thank you chris this is from an experience