Sinner

Forgive me lord, for I have sinned.

With every breath I take,

Every ideation whirring through my mind

I sin

Do you accept me now?

Forgive me lord, for I have

Cursed

Kissed

    Fucked     

So, with my apology,

Can I go to heaven now?

Will you open the gates for me?

Open your pants,

Let me f**k you slowly

Until all of my sin is washed clean?

Open your pearly gates,

Let me f**k you over from the inside

Gain intel

I’ll burn your “paradise” to the ground

What will you do

When your slaving “souls” bleed?

Reviews

[Libby McKeown]

So, with my apology, Can I go to heaven now? What a great line! And I liked the way it spirals down into the deepest of sin and sacrilege. This is a bold work, and I much admire it. The font is a little distracting. But, just my humble estimation. Keep writing (as if you would do otherwise. . .)

[Kruppz]

We have two things in common- sarcasm and atheism. Poetry is not my outlet for sarcasm though. ;) This was a funny read too. At first I thought it to be a sincere apology. And then...
"Will you open the gates for me?
Open your pants,
Let me f**k you slowly"
God! Lmao!
Profound lines:
"I’ll burn your “paradise” to the ground
What will you do
When your slaving “souls” bleed?"

[kjsa]

This is great makes me laugh but it also made think. I like the "I'll burn your "paradise" to the ground" part.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

powerful...loved it

[Crow]

A profound work!

[nostal]

Intense. Enough said.