Gemini

I like the constellation Gemini. It inspired me.

As the morning freezes your hand
It soon drifts into a languid afternoon
The day becomes so slow and bland
Finally, from the depths, emerges Moon

Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini

A broken-winged bird had followed me along
It rested its little tired head and I said to it,
"When your crying is over, lets sing a love song,
One that your worn heart will never forget."

Even if we are across the world apart
Our hearts remain in sync with this melody
Embrace the warm rhythm so it won't depart
We are the connected sides of Gemini

When you're alone, don't you ever cry
Just take my hand and we'll find the lost path
With our joined hands we could start to fly
Let there be love where there once was wrath

We are the connected sides of Gemini

Author's Note

TO CLARIFY: I don't know about others, but I pronounce Gemini *Jeh-mee-nee*.
Just to clear up the rhyming.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Very good and well told. My sign is Libra and I'm completable to Gemini so in a way if I was dating a Gemini we would "We are the connected sides of Gemini" This is a good poem. Your love poems are good.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I don't believe in this kind of stuff though because that is against what I believe...well anyway good job.

[Hippy]

im a gemini and i was drawn to this probly because of that, but i think its alright, i think the flow lacks in a few lines but is stronger in others, and i like how you pronounce gemini its unique and it is benificial to the flow of a few lines, i like how it makes me think of other dialects

[Roxi L]

interesting. I really like it. My astroligical sign is a Gemini so thisis so true.

Roxi

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Intersting and Mystical write. God bless

[Coyote Poetry]

The stars and romance. Been the motivator for great poem of love for 2000 years. I like the way you connect life and Gemini. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Bard Constantine]

I enjoyed the aspect of the other side where lost love resides... gives this piece a sort of haunting melody. Nicely done...

[Senseless whatever]

Nice write. The message and inspiration are clear. The flow of this is a little choppy.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

imaginative lovely write~

[Poeticpiers]

Though most pronounce it Gemini . I wll not argue why should I
I liked your theme and rhyming scheme.
May I suggest you study meterYour words would flow so much sweeter
when read aloud .The acid test But I accept that you know best
about the way you choose to write.It is your birthright

I do not wish to criticise I merely offer you advice
for you to accept or reject I do not know what to expect.
The final choice is up to you I cannot tell you what to do.
I am a fan of metered verse.Although I am not averse
to well written poetic prose.I am old fashioned I suppose