Loving you

Verse 1.
I see a life in you, your soul is free
You had crash me down like a rainstorm
I feel your look at me, it's seeing right through me
And all I wanna do is to get to know you

Verse 2
I am asking myself why do you have to be so far away
But when I close my eyes I see you standing there
Making your way to me,in the crowd you've found me
Because we are the same,old souls in a young body

Chorus
I am falling to fast now, you can't save me
I am breaking apart, this air is too stiff
Choking with my own love, it's unreal
I can't believe how much you're making me feel

Verse 3
I feel like I could dance with you all night long
No lies, no pretending, with you I can be me
Just love, no fights, we have the same dream
To find the world behind a wall so we could see

Prechorus
It's getting too serious,I feel like I am hanging on
Every word you say, and I can't hear anything else

Chorus

Why do you have to be so enchanting?
Making me fall in love so deep
I can't get out of it

Chorus

Reviews

[Rute Santos]

I think if you put some musical notes in that, it's going to be perfect :)
Great poem :D

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Wow was taking a trip to memmory lane- :(
Those two verses were absolute I could see my self in it and when the rest came my eyes followed you I love this,truely i do I see the writer in it and my self marvelouse!!

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you very much on your review :) It means a lot to me :) I am very glad that you find yourself in my lyrics :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe when you releasing a song?? Let me know asap hehe take care and continue with your beautiful and remarkable work and if inspiration or ideas are needed go read my stories or inbox me it will always be a plesure to a wrighter that i can see my life in her work :) mwa love your work!! :)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you again :) And I am not relesing a song, because I still don't have music for this lyrics, but one day, maybe :) Yeah, sure I'll read your work :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Your kindness is well appreciated :)
Thank you

[Rahul]

Is that a poem or a great song ? :)
i liked this one too and you fluttered me by such a piece once again. I love your chorus's...and verse 3..that's really well and well penned. your flow is great and impactable i think especially to me.
this time you'll deserve to have this 100/100 because your this write makes me crazy and memorized my nice moments...of life. well,this piece's again i think plucked from reality and a tree of realness's...where truthness's fall in a form of sweets fruits...
hey....you should have to continue this write..add few more nice words....
you made if from your heart...i got it.

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you for your wonderful reviews. To answer on your question, this is a song, actually lyrics. It is very nice to hear that somebody likes my work. About the advice-thank you, maybe I'll continue it :)

[Rahul]

Thanks a lot to notify me that you'll continue it someone and i wish you'd then love to let me know about your this edition...:) i'd really love to read your this full song :)
my pleasure !

[UnderCompulsion]

Sure, I'll let you know if I'll continue it :)

[Chris]

A heart swaying to the tones of life.

[Blue Ivory]

Yeah I can definitely relate to this. Your song is really heartfelt and emotional. I love the part about hanging on every word :3

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you! :) I appreciate your every comment :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Wow was taking a trip to memmory lane- :(
Those two verses were absolute I could see my self in it and when the rest came my eyes followed you I love this,truely i do I see the writer in it and my self marvelouse!!