What is going on?

What is going on?

A Poem by UnderTheTree
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This is quite slopy, once again. Written within the last 20 minutes of Art Appreciation.

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I can’t help it,

I really cant.

This feeling is overwhelming

How could someone do this to me?

Just looking at her makes something inside me burn.

The sensation is great,

It’s inspiring.

What feeling is this though?

Is it simply nervousness?

Or does it go deeper?

I’ve felt this before,

But even then it puzzled me.

Why does this occur!

Looking, speaking, even thinking about her

pulls on something deep inside of me.

Someone help me,

I have to know what’s happening to me.


© 2009 UnderTheTree



Author's Note

UnderTheTree
dont be harsh... i rarely write. just gimme some input

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You are in awe of what some call lovelust.. with no way to know if it's love or lust yet.. but an inner-burning tugging inside. You want to find a careful balance with this feeling.. embrace it.. but spend time with your friends, activities like sports or things you do for fun.. try hard not to neglect studies.. as most struggle with all of this it's harder when we are young in some ways and easier in others. So carefree young love can be.. half the population will say they met the love of their lives in high school.. others will say they fell in stupidity.. you have to choose for you if you pursue or refrain.. depending on your dreams. Another one that I could understand .. I was a tomboy.. and I have children one is now 18 (about to turn nineteen).. but I know how powerful those feelings can be when you are a teen! My daughter just went through a very tough time in a relationship.. that has set her off course.. but she's back on track again. =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


It seems like the narrator is in love or something. They really seems to like the girl that they speak about in the story.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i know exactally where you are coming from with this, i know just what u mean. i really like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 25, 2009

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I dont generally write, but sometimes i feel like it... Im a novice. I use elementary words. I dont care usually. more..

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