Entrance to Life

Entrance to Life

A Poem by Ed

Do well and the world around me will change
some people know this
others find out
there are those that do it
and those who don't know
what its like to get out
I exit fear
begin a entrance
to life
writing this

 no advantage or pride

all the things I couldn't do
vicariously, sadly
and temporarily.

I couldn't do
faring with what is fair
I think I can 
know, understand, and care.

© 2018 Ed

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BEAUTIFUL! The intricacy of the thoughts that this poem is trying to convey is so beautifully knitted that I am struck. Loved it!

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Added on March 24, 2017
Last Updated on January 16, 2018



Houston, TX

So I'm 28. Recovering from health problems if you like you can help me. At the link posted. Writing has been a way to get myself through difficult times. I enjoy it. Its what I do when life gi.. more..

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A Poem by Ed