Regret

Regret

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I regret not telling you I loved you

I regret not feeling your chest pressed against mine

I regret not running after you that day in the airport

I regret coming to your funeral

I regret killing myself because now I'm in Hell while your in Heaven

 

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Author's Note

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I don't know if it's exactly like the old one....Be it better or worse! :( At least the picture is the same!

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Lonelyness strikes at the heart of so many people. Lonelyness causes us to remember and dwell on those charished moments of the past.
I love they way you clearly brought this story through such few lines. I can understand the torment that loosing one that was so important would drive a person to do crazy deeds. And how regret would then torment the soul afterwards.
Great Job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow, blunt, impactful.......

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I REALLY MEANT THE TITLE TO SAY "REGRET" SRRY :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have a lot of regrets......a very powerful piece. You must have missed the person very much!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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