Felony Mistaken

Felony Mistaken

A Poem by ;

I see her there among the shadows

I wonder if she knows shes going to the gallows

Her name is Isabella mellows

And shes convicted for corrupting the little fellows

 

I wonder if he sees me

I hope he knows I'm not going willingly

And to make this a little bit more spicy

I'm going to curse elegantly

He thinks he'll catch me

But look I didn't commit this felony---

It was my twin Dalphany!

 

 

 

© 2008 ;


Author's Note

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This is the first and last poem that is not tragic that I wil make! Hope you enjoy!

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LOL...this was fun yet tragic. You have a knack for this kind of mixture. Almost like a sarcastic humor. Great job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


haha! I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Lovely twist at the end!

Posted 16 Years Ago


You use make targic poems really good, you should stop making them.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wonderfully written. Nicely done. Enjoyed this very much.


Great Write.
Rayne

Posted 16 Years Ago


LOL....oh no your twin. This is a great piece and make me smile when I got to the end. A great job here :)


Posted 16 Years Ago


I liked it! It was a small twist in the end, that made me realize just what was to happen.
However, I would still say this is tragic. For in the end one of them will be caught and sent to the gallows. Unless, that is, you write what happens next, and they both get away and find happiness in a new land!
I challange you! lol :)
Good poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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