Crying (Tears)

The tears

run down her face

like a crystal waterfall

on a perfect day

 

She cries for everyone,

for she carries

the weight of the world

on her small shoulders

 

No one can help her

No one can hear her

No one can give a damn

She's on her own

 

She fights

She struggles

She kills

to get this feeling away

 

She never changes

frozen in time

Never moving forward or back

because of those tears

 

Those crystals

they run down her cheeks

she remembers when they began,

but she has no idea when they will stop

Author's Note

Ignore Grammer and Spelling. This came to me when I was listening to "Extraordinary Girl" by Green Day. Reviews please.

Reviews

[Short.Nerd]

It's sad but I like it. It had an excellent flow throughout this. Great job!

[Tasha]

This was amazing and kind of sad. You created this very well and you did a great job with this. I loved the flow of this as well.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[SilentVerses]

Such sorrowful tunes burden your words with a haunting hurt, which the beautiful writing contrasts starkly, flitting the words are immediate and flow fluid from your fingertips.