A Poem by mark

A poem i wrote to my girlfriend about us going to Queensland. please view and leave reviews. I would like to hear what you thought about it :) Thanks it will be very much appreciated.


Babe we are going to be
 Trying so hard for this.
It is definitely something 
We do not want to miss.

Going Queensland with you will 
Be the best thing we have ever done.
I know we are going 
To have so much fun.

Saving for this trip
I know will be tough.
We should save enough money 
So we can do allot of stuff.

When we get there 
We will not want to leave.
We are going to be in paradise,
This we won't believe.

Queensland will be a great place to be, 
This state is our favorite.
It's just going to take some time
 and effort to save for it.

We will be on our own 
For 7 whole days.
This will be so great 
In so many ways.

We can do whatever we want 
Without people in our way.
We will realize how great it is 
And we are going to want to stay.

Sitting there watching TV
 Holding and cuddling you.
Doing that is going to make us forget 
The bad times we have gone through. 

I can't wait to relax with you 
In the pool and spa.
We can also drive around the coast 
In our new hired car.

I know you can't wait to shop 
And explore a new place.
When we get there i can't wait 
To see the look on your face.

I can't wait to 
do this with you.
Being alone with you for a week 
is something i have always wanted to do.

Doing this will be something 
we will never regret.
It will be a great memory 
that we can never forget.

We need to do this sweetie
we really do.
I'm really happy that my first trip there
 is going to be with you.


© 2013 mark

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Sounds wonderful...really hope you both get to go soon :) x

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

Thanks raven.
Yeah we are hoping to go by our 2 years in feb, we have actually saved a fair b.. read more

5 Years Ago

got to follow yours dreams hun, life too short not too. Be wonderful for you both :) x

5 Years Ago

yeah it would be :) thanks
I wish you both a lot of fun in Queensland if you haven't been there already ;)
Great poem, I could totally feel your excitement :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

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5 Years Ago

you're most welcome and best of luck to you guys so your dream will come true :)

5 Years Ago

hehe thanks again :)

5 Years Ago

you're most welcome again :)
i love it babe u can write about other stuff that was a great poem most of it rhymed extremely well, and everyline was exactly true :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


5 Years Ago

i cant its not up lol i thought u finished it u must have started it
cimmy wuv xxxooo

5 Years Ago

im taking forever told u i cant think

5 Years Ago

well u suck :P jokes just do something else then :)

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melbourne, Australia

hey i'm mark. I am a really friendly person I get along with almost anybody. I have an amazing girlfriend that I love so much, I never want to lose her. I have just started getting into writing poems... more..


A Poem by mark


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