QUEENSLAND WILL HAPPEN :)

A poem i wrote to my girlfriend about us going to Queensland. please view and leave reviews. I would like to hear what you thought about it :) Thanks it will be very much appreciated.

Babe we are going to be

 Trying so hard for this.

It is definitely something 

We do not want to miss.

Going Queensland with you will 

Be the best thing we have ever done.

I know we are going 

To have so much fun.

Saving for this trip

I know will be tough.

We should save enough money 

So we can do allot of stuff.

When we get there 

We will not want to leave.

We are going to be in paradise,

This we won't believe.

Queensland will be a great place to be, 

This state is our favorite.

It's just going to take some time

 and effort to save for it.

We will be on our own 

For 7 whole days.

This will be so great 

In so many ways.

We can do whatever we want 

Without people in our way.

We will realize how great it is 

And we are going to want to stay.

Sitting there watching TV

 Holding and cuddling you.

Doing that is going to make us forget 

The bad times we have gone through. 

I can't wait to relax with you 

In the pool and spa.

We can also drive around the coast 

In our new hired car.

I know you can't wait to shop 

And explore a new place.

When we get there i can't wait 

To see the look on your face.

I can't wait to 

do this with you.

Being alone with you for a week 

is something i have always wanted to do.

Doing this will be something 

we will never regret.

It will be a great memory 

that we can never forget.

We need to do this sweetie

we really do.

I'm really happy that my first trip there

 is going to be with you.

 

Author's Note

please view and review :) It would be great to hear your feedback. I would like to know what you all think about it. Thank you :)

Reviews

[NA]

Sounds wonderful...really hope you both get to go soon :) x

[mark]

Thanks raven.
Yeah we are hoping to go by our 2 years in feb, we have actually saved a fair bit so far and we're not working i don't know how we're doing it lol.

[NA]

got to follow yours dreams hun, life too short not too. Be wonderful for you both :) x

[mark]

yeah it would be :) thanks

[annabellee]

I wish you both a lot of fun in Queensland if you haven't been there already ;)
Great poem, I could totally feel your excitement :)

[mark]

thank you so much :) i can't wait to go its my first time going on a plane. cimmonnes been there once but it will be special for us to go because we are going to try and go for out 2 years so we are hoping that will happen :)
thanks again for your review :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome and best of luck to you guys so your dream will come true :)

[mark]

hehe thanks again :)

[annabellee]

you're most welcome again :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i love it babe u can write about other stuff that was a great poem most of it rhymed extremely well, and everyline was exactly true :)

[mark]

hehe im glad you like it babe :)
i guess i can write about other stuff it took me like an hour to write it though.
i actually really like it too i rekon i did well thanks babe :)
i cant wait for this

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i cant wait either we will really try we will make this happen babe promise :) Thats not really that long it was a big poem u did a really great job so dont bullshit to me that u cant write bout anything else coz you can :)
Ur welcome hun

[mark]

i promise i will try and save for it as much as i can :)
hehe sowwy im not that good though i struggled to come up with that did u see the part where i rhymed "favourite" with "save for it"? :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

yer that part was pretty clue :P (smartass) ur better then u think u are though :)

[mark]

hehe rhymed 3 words with one word :P
thank you sweetheart :)

[mark]

u havnt replied to my message :( lol

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha i know u smartass :P Ur welcome again darling.
it was a long message hold ur horses its there now

[mark]

hehe sowwy :P i couldn't wait :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i know ur so impatent. ur gonna have to wait now writin a poem :)

[mark]

for me? yay :) hehe ok ill wait :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha no its called change i wrote 1 last time u want another one im running out of things to write boy lol

[mark]

hehe i know i still had things to say bout u in the queensland poem hehe :)
ok ill read it now :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

haha u do that

[mark]

i cant its not up lol i thought u finished it u must have started it

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

im taking forever told u i cant think

[mark]

well u suck :P jokes just do something else then :)