OUR FIRST DATE

OUR FIRST DATE

A Poem by mark
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A poem about our very special first date :)

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I can never forget our first date,
I was pretty sad how long I had to wait. 
You looked so beautiful, shy, cute and sweet, 
You have no idea how fast you made my heart beat

I was so nervous to meet you then,
I remember leaving the house around ten.
You were so happy that day,
You gave me many reasons to stay.

I couldn't wait to see your gorgeous face,
When i did I knew i was in the right place.
You were so cute coming off that train,
You were so shy when you hugged me in the rain.

It was pretty awkward at the start,
But we still never wanted to be apart.
We had some lunch and had a nice talk,
We then finished and went for a walk.

Looking around the shops being around you,
Made me the happiest person i could ever be. 
After the walk the time suddenly flew,
We went into the cinemas to see a movie.

It felt so nice, you laying on my chest.
it was a feeling i can't explain, it was the best.
I really enjoyed our very first kiss,
It was a special moment i just couldn't miss.

I loved it when you were in my arms,
It made me so happy and very calm.
It was hard to leave you after all this,
Especially after our amazing first kiss.

I just wanted to stay with you longer,
Because with you my heart felt stronger.
We had the cutest walk at your place,
It was amazing feeling your warm embrace.

We stopped walking to kiss in such a cute way,
It was so special, that's all i can say.

A few hours later i had to leave that night,
It took us so long to say goodbye.
We were hugging each other very tight,
And then you started to cry.

It hurt so much seeing you that way,
I couldn't leave yet, i had to stay.

I made you feel better by holding you tight,
I then left by kissing you goodnight.
This day was the greatest of them all,
I just couldn't wait till our next phone call.

We had fun that day right from the start,
You and i now own each others heart.
I love you so much my gorgeous girl.
You are now my whole wide world.





© 2013 mark



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I know Cimmy to be a kind-hearted person, sweet, and beautiful. It makes me glad that she has found a boyfriend who loves her as she loves him. Ahh, couples like you who publicly proclaim your love to the world is something to be envied! I wish you the best in your relationship!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for your sweet words blue :) im very lucky to have her she is great :) i love her .. read more



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wow,this is such a beautiful poem. it's so sweet and full of love and it's the best way to describe your first date. it's always much sweeter when the guys write about their girlfriends as well. awesome poem, well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


mark

3 Years Ago

thank you so much :) it was an amazing first date, and i couldnt ask for a better day :)
I know Cimmy to be a kind-hearted person, sweet, and beautiful. It makes me glad that she has found a boyfriend who loves her as she loves him. Ahh, couples like you who publicly proclaim your love to the world is something to be envied! I wish you the best in your relationship!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

3 Years Ago

thank you so much for your sweet words blue :) im very lucky to have her she is great :) i love her .. read more
There's nothing better than a first date :) how long have you and Cimmy been together for?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cimmy wuv xxxooo

3 Years Ago

haha :P all good thank you hun :) Congratulations to you and your fiance to :)
adetailedflameofpurestjoy

3 Years Ago

thank you :)
mark

3 Years Ago

thanks for your review and yeah cimmy answered your quetion hehe :) we cant way to get away for a fe.. read more
Awesome write, the way you described it, it was like i was there
great write man! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

lol thanks mate glad u liked it. it was an amazing day actually :)
thanks again dude :)
An adorable first date and a sweet young love.. nicely penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


mark

4 Years Ago

thank you so much lori :)
Such a romantic and sweet description of your first date, well done :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

hehe thank you anna :)
thanks for your review :)
annabellee

4 Years Ago

you're most welcome :)
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Oh to be young and in love...this is so beautiful, you two are so cute together :) x

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

4 Years Ago

hehe thank you so much :) allot of people think so too. thanks for your review :)
Theres to many amazing lines to pick a favourite.
After re reading it i think it might be my fav poem of yours.
You did an amazing job on this one babe, like your own story of how we meet but in a poem i think its better then mine.
Its amazing how great the rhyming was, and how it related so much to everything that happened that day.
Your truly talented, im so lucky to have a guy that writes me such sweet poems.
I love you so much keep writing because i love it :")

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mark

3 Years Ago

lol thank you :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

3 Years Ago

HAHA! we cant hes at home right now an hour away :P I don't have a car :P awwww thanks :)
mark

3 Years Ago

haha :P we will have our own room in 2 weeks for 4 days anyway haha :P ALLLLL ALONE!!!!! :)

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